"NEW HEIGHTS"

In this novelette, "New Heights," Petra discovered that through adversity she could find love.

Believing life is magical Petra married Robert right out of college. Then several years in she discovers he is secretly cheating. She confronted him. Divorce is essential, an Atlantic City vacation compulsory, then she meets Ramón. It was love at first sight. They travel across country. Then untimely their vacation is cut short when Popi has a heart attack. He takes her home to be by Popi's side.

In a confrontation Robert Ramón takes a bullet to the chest. Intrigue enters the story w ... more »

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K_Vamps

1/26/2009 7:15 PM PST

the cover artwork is fanomonal (but that was def not spelled rite. try to sound it out. fa-nah-mo-nal) kinda

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IBOK

11/17/2008 1:39 PM PST

Nice work. Kobi

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nrhatch

11/10/2008 11:47 AM PST

Your story synopsis sounds intriguing, but this could benefit from another proof-reading. Stumbling over typos is apt to scare all but the most dedicated fans away. Examples from your first Chapter:

She gave me some good advice some good and some rather questionable. -- omit the first "good" and add a hyphen after advice, perhaps

On one hand, I was gland on the other believe you me; I was still apprehensive. -- glad, not gland

Enjoy college, this is this is going to be the most fun you ever have until you get out on your own. -- delete second "this is"

Good luck! nancy

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