"NEW HEIGHTS"

Book Info

Project Leader:

GLFernandez

Participants:
The WEbook community

Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only

Format:
Collection

Type:
Fiction

Genre:
Romance

Language:
English

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In this novelette, "New Heights," Petra discovered that through adversity she could find love.

Robert and I met and married. A year later, I found out, he was cheating. I confronted him we fought and he went to jail. While in jail, I got a divorce.

To clear my head I took a road trip and met Ramón we fell in love. When Popi got sick, we cut our trip short and flew home.
Robert and Ramón fought. Ramón took a bullet to the chest and Robert went to jail. An investigation proved Robert’s brother planned to stage Robert's murder and blame me. They went to jail. I won my freed ... More

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IBOK

11/17/2008 01:39 PM PT

Nice work. Kobi

nrhatch

11/10/2008 11:47 AM PT

Your story synopsis sounds intriguing, but this could benefit from another proof-reading. Stumbling over typos is apt to scare all but the most dedicated fans away. Examples from your first Chapter:

She gave me some good advice some good and some rather questionable. -- omit the first "good" and add a hyphen after advice, perhaps

On one hand, I was gland on the other believe you me; I was still apprehensive. -- glad, not gland

Enjoy college, this is this is going to be the most fun you ever have until you get out on your own. -- delete second "this is"

Good luck! nancy