Book Info
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Project Leader:
AlyssaJWhite
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
Short Story
Children's -
Language:
English
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Once Upon a Bedtime
If you were sitting in the hallway listening in on a conversation between a little girl and her Mama about bedtime this is what you might hear. A very practical explanation disguised by a far fetched and silly bedtime story. That is what you will find in the pages of Once Upon a Bedtime. An endearing and quirky tale of "Mommys and Daddys and big girls and big boys and littler girls and littler boys and even eensy teensy weensy tiny whiney little wittle belittled and twittled babys who never eve
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This story has got a lot of potential. First you must get rid of all the repetition. Then add some new material to go with it. For example: maybe people got so tired they put their clothes on backwards or wrong, etc. Really eleborate more on how tired people are...less on the repetitive stuff.
I hope that this helps you!
Kathy
I hope that this helps you!
Kathy
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