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~One Small Step Into a Stranger's Mind
~Take one small step into a stranger's mind.
The greatest poetry this side of the Rockies.
This side of anything!
The greatest poetry this side of the Rockies.
This side of anything!
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7/30/2008 12:53 PM PDT
it seems very... classic. the 1st of yours that I've read.
7/29/2008 7:45 PM PDT
I like the rhythm, it's different but yet rolls along easily. I was not expecting the sadness from reading the title or the first stanza. I also like the ending, it leaves me waiting for....
7/28/2008 1:36 PM PDT
I like this especially:
"I'm your next step at the cliff's edge
where one more breath may be too much."
Conjures up a vivid mental image for me.
"I'm your next step at the cliff's edge
where one more breath may be too much."
Conjures up a vivid mental image for me.
7/27/2008 7:31 PM PDT
I'm at a loss for words. Wow, in all it's simplicity is the first word that comes to mind
I'd love to pick her a moon flower also.
I'd love to pick her a moon flower also.
7/27/2008 1:17 PM PDT
Thanks Jackie!
I'll have to read some of your work!
I'll have to read some of your work!
7/26/2008 3:36 PM PDT
Once again love it, maybe because my poems are very similar...
(dark). Good job, I can relate...the writing...LOL
(dark). Good job, I can relate...the writing...LOL
7/26/2008 2:23 PM PDT
Very good. Very similar to the way I write my poems. Good Job!
Jackie
Jackie
7/19/2008 3:03 PM PDT
I agree with the other reviewers...it's a good poem. A tragic moment described with good structure and rhyme.
-Michael
-Michael
7/19/2008 11:25 AM PDT
Atlantis is def my fav. Great job and good luck! Bravo
~Britt~
~Britt~
7/19/2008 10:54 AM PDT
I have to say that this is my favorite.
7/18/2008 4:55 PM PDT
Some of these are quite wonderful -- like "You've got mail." Others, especially the Haiku, don't seem to have any depth.
good luck!
good luck!
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