Only in my dreams

Just read and find out, cause this is a spur of the moment thing(:

"I just need you to try."
"Why should I?"
"It could be good for me...for both of us."
"But you've hurt me before."
"That was before. This time, it'll be different because we're different."
"Are you sure?"
"Just trust me?"
"Okay."

Those words, so perfect.
Too bad it was just a dream

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Ivy_rose_Poison

1/25/2010 7:18 PM PST

Please hurry and write the next chapter!!! I want to read it ASAP!

vampiremaiden

12/23/2009 5:09 PM PST

Yeah I agree. It sucks when something you want to happen happens but then you realize you woke up from a dream.... This story seems intriguing, I'll give it a read!!!!

-Melissa XOXO

Bennyboi

12/14/2009 2:18 PM PST

I feel that showing someones journey through a dream is sometimes a bit disappointing, especially if your told right at the start! Why?!!! take that off, i would have wanted it to be a suprise dont reveal everything before it even begins. Anyway, you do pull it off no matter what! Well done. :), the work here is impressive keep it up, don't stop.

~Ben