"Rebel" shows a lot of strength & believing in yourself.   Thanx for sharing your works with me.  I voted yes.  G'luck.  Steve

You have my vote!

Great poems. Very interesting topics, and surely worth the read! I enjoyed them very much, especially People of Hope.

~Kate

Good work here. It may not be perfect, but it is still worth a vote.

And if you have the time...

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I loved all 3 of your poems. There is a lot of "passion" in your poems. I also found when reading the first two of your poems, that you surrounded your poems with alot of  "hope"....And we all need hope! :) Very well expressed.
"My Death has come" - No hope with-in this one? Almost like someone has given up before they should! Or perhaps they are hiding behind a mask (he who smiles out in the open but holds no mercy on the inside) with some strong feelings that needs to be spoken openly!
Excellent poetry my friend :)
Mahoney X

they start well, but change as you go. if kept a certain way it may work out better, and rewording may be something to look into as well.

Strong emotions, all three poems I found  had messages of enough is enough.  I liked the simplicity of the words.
People of Hope was full of reverence, to the pain, and cruelty that war inflicts on all. Wonderful words. 


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There is a certain non chalance attitude in all three which is perhaps your stamp here, and I guess they might be interpreted differently according to the state of mind that reads them, 

 I particularly liked People of Hope, and had any number of cultures in war ridden countries come to mind, or even races misplaced thrrough time and history.  I liked your consice stylings too.  Good luck.

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Nice work here. I liked the People of Hope.

Nice work, glad to have read it and voted...and thank you

You have my vote for " My Death Has Come".

Thank you for your comment and your invite, I enjoyed reading these I wish you well in the vote, good luck

people of hope and my death has come are both very good

wow, very strong words!  great poetry!  i hope your work gets published!!!!!
thanks for your vote, i really appreciate it!

Powerful... i voted... good luck ;-)

Shah. X

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Many thanks. x

I think you did fairly well in raising many thoughts with each line in Rebel and People of Hope. I felt that My death has Come has the most emotion of the three.
Great job and good luck in the vote.

Good job

General:
You have my vote People Of Hope was my favourite,
For without hope what
 do we have ?
Absoloutely
nothing.


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If you have already looked thank you.

Content:
The content of all three poems is very thought provoking.

Imagery:
People of hope brought to mind all the news clips one see's of civilians fleeing war torn areas.

Publish.

Please;
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Your themes are moving.  I wish you well.

My Death Has Come is powerful in its delivery.  It was my favorite of the trilogy.

each line is short and to the point, while maintaining the whole poem's value. Fantastic job here, a yes vote.

Interesting pieces.  --rebel to hope to end--They deserved my vote.  Good luck.

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Publish.

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Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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XD This is really good, I think my favorite by far is the first one, it's so right in your face and screaming I don't care that it instantly won me over :D Thanks for voting for my work as well, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I'm going to vote for you too, that first poem really had me going :D