G'Luck ~!

Definitely Publish...beautiful Poetry, love Wennie xxxhugs

General:
An intelligent and beautiful poem.

Form:
The structure is planned and each word, line is chose carefully. 

Imagery:
The use of language and structure created a suspense.  I wanted to get to the end to see her final decision - to be with him or not to be with him!

Musicality:
The French language creates such beautiful sounds when spoken out loud-- I loved it!

Good poems. Voted.

Feel free to check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

you have my vote.

your work is brilliant.

'Remplir Se Rendre' is my favorite and you've got my vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

Form:  easy to read, enjoyable
Content:  Mesmerizing
Imagery:  Great story telling
Tone: Excellent
Musicality:  Yes the rhythm suggests lyrics for songs.
Wonderful poems, deserving publication.

3 brilliant poems, Lucy and the Devil was very clever. A yes vote

great poetry!  keep up the great writing!
I hope your pieces get published!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School

I had nightmares on a repetitive basis similair to Lucy and the Devil .. I could visualize what you was saying in the poem..

You have my vote

http://www.webook.com/project/Walls-of-an-Emotional-Prison
if you have a chance check out mine.

Complete surrender had a lovely flow to it.
The small amount of French gave it mysticism and passion.
I really think you have talent keep up the good work.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you have time.

I always love reading your writing...you my friend are brilliant!!!

Imagery:
Your words are very classic yet original. I love the imagery it shows. Showing more than telling. FAntastic! Yes vote.

Like them very compelling, almost modern day versions of the "Romanticism Era"; especially "Wonderful World", that was my fav.

You have a very classic way with words.

You have my vote.

I absolutely loved your first poem. It was beautiful and elegant. Wonderful!

PLease check out mine?
http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart

Please and thank you!

romantic and beautiful this love

beautiful poem 'wonderful world; i think like this about things too; the sun, and moon, dawn and dusk and everything in between. appeals to me a lot, great work.

i've read your poems before and thought then they should be voted for publishing; i still think it. lucy and the devil is a great story-poem,

interesting mix of good and evil, I liked the God and Goddess aspect in wonderful world and a complete turnaround in Lucy and the devil, nice work, I voted yes.

i love your work!!! i really enjoyed the 3rd 'Lucy and the Devil"
read it right through...
PUBLISH!!!



if you want to read mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

"WONDERFUL WORLD" is a beautiful piece of work. I like that one the most oout of the 3. I like how well crafted out it is. My vote is in. Good luck.

~Half Pint

All your poetry is excellent and I wish you much luck. You are among the best writers here. I love everything you have written. You are a master at creative writing. Of course I voted ( YES)

Awesome work!...I can't pick my fave, they are all so good, and so different from one another!http
   If you have time.....http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems

Wonderful poetry, you have my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/Remission-of-a-Younger-Us

good writing well done



http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Great.  I love Lucy and the Devil! CF

You have my vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/Chelseas-Poems

great work....
vote submitted...

Lovely!  You've got my vote!

A definite Publish!

General:
Voted for you

Form:
Wonderful World: A beautifully written poem that deserves it's place in any poetry book, full of imagery and magically crafted words

A yes vote.

You are so eloquent wish I had that knack

General:
Lacking in originality - and far too long in my opinion!

Form:
Becomes very monotonous I feel it could have had more variety and impact as a short story - this is specifically true of 'Lucy and the Devil'

Content:
Subject matter in general lacks any originality of thought.

Musicality of the prose is lacking variety - if this were music very like the same notes repeated over and over again.

Overall I feel you need to concentrate on finding new ways to express original thoughts and ways to express those thoughts in a less monotonous style.  I found the constant sing-songy style a little irritating and eventually boring.  Please do not take these comments as a personal attack I sincerely feel your work would improve immediately if you applied some of the above suggestions!

Kind Regards John

Worthy of a vote

I am definately a fan...girl.  love how you see things.

Good luck, definitely publish. You have a very unique style that just a few people have on this site, i really appreciate  and admire that.

Dear Dante, I've grown an appreciation towards you from our casual coworking. I like your writing and all, but as much as I do respect and admire you, I must insist that you really sharpen this. I've been reading many contention projects and I'm afraid that it will be hard. You need to give better quality to your readers if you expect an objective vote to go thumbs up or expect to pierce into Webook's staff likes.

I know you can do it before the voting begins.
Audn.