Book Info
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Project Leader:
KenyonMenyon
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
Literary
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Language:
English
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Maybe it’s a character you developed or over developed for a story. A minor character that you wish you could have developed more. A story-less, home-less character yearning to breathe free... A friend, neighbor, relation that you would like to profile (for fictional use) and need a place to hash it out. Good guys, bad girls, heros or villains it does not really matter.
Put them here, get some feedback, hear other angles, maybe get a lead to a storyline, maybe share a character for another s ... more »
Put them here, get some feedback, hear other angles, maybe get a lead to a storyline, maybe share a character for another s ... more »
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Haliem Deimerdi:
Is a nice young fellow who speaks really good English.
He's studying for a PhD in Petroleum Engineering at a Big Ten university.There is no question in his mind about returning home to Algiers to teach when he graduates.
He smiles and explains that his country is very generous. He points out that I will owe my country, the United States, a huge sum of money when I graduate. I be paying it off for years. after I graduate? What will he owe his country for his education? Not a dinar!
I ask him about Moammar Gaddafi. Again he smiles and asks, "Who?"
"Is Regan your country?", he asks.
"I'm hungry", he continues with a grin, "where will we find some really good couscous and paella this evening? Couscous made with nice fresh mint leaves. Paella made with big succulent scallops and shrimp, just like we have in Algiers."
Is a nice young fellow who speaks really good English.
He's studying for a PhD in Petroleum Engineering at a Big Ten university.There is no question in his mind about returning home to Algiers to teach when he graduates.
He smiles and explains that his country is very generous. He points out that I will owe my country, the United States, a huge sum of money when I graduate. I be paying it off for years. after I graduate? What will he owe his country for his education? Not a dinar!
I ask him about Moammar Gaddafi. Again he smiles and asks, "Who?"
"Is Regan your country?", he asks.
"I'm hungry", he continues with a grin, "where will we find some really good couscous and paella this evening? Couscous made with nice fresh mint leaves. Paella made with big succulent scallops and shrimp, just like we have in Algiers."
Housedad I thank you for your advice about letting the 'Demons into the sunlight' in a few days they will be here hopefully and you will see them in action.
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thanks, the project I am doing includes the Tearful Demons but this is on my upstairs computer which does not have internet. Also the project is more of a group of series so I have not finished it yet.
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I have at least 4 of characters, but I'll pick one of them and post it by tonight. Hopefully...I kinda hate my busy schedule. xD
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The bio-stats/blurbs are fine ,,, but I was thinking more of a stroyline, like mine. It may compel the reader to have a look at the proiect ...
Plus, stating the simple stats does not leave much room for feedback ...
Plus, stating the simple stats does not leave much room for feedback ...
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I've got 2 in so far, more to come! Not sure if I'm getting it right though.
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PS:
If the character is part of an existing or ongoing project, you should include a link at the bottom/end of your submission ...
If the character is part of an existing or ongoing project, you should include a link at the bottom/end of your submission ...
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This is meant to be a “For Fun” project. A chance to exorcize some demons. If you are like me, you have some characters on files or in hard drives begging for the light of day. Or you are developing a character and want to ‘run him up the flagpole ...’ So here is a chance to do that ,,,
Thanx for looking in ...
james
Thanx for looking in ...
james
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