Passing Through the Gap

Their relatives, every single one of them, had their faces upturned toward a point in the sky. Kaylin looked, too, but she couldn’t see anything. A chill shivered down her spine, having naught to do with the chill of the night air though both were clad only in their nighties. She had a precognition that they were about to witness something very horrible.

Kaylin and Shakira Jira are twins living in the medieval Norae. The planet is deteriorating all around them, and when the Evil One conjugates a way out of the world called the Gap, people after people after people decide to take it. But little do they know that it isn't the easy way out they have imagined ... no, it is the gate-way to hell.
The Jira twins and some friends they find on the way are on a quest to save the once-beautiful world of Norae from absolute extinction.

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Nicole_sparks1

4/8/2011 2:23 PM PDT

Very interesting...

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JaneAusten

4/7/2011 8:06 PM PDT

I didn't really stop, just did it on word

trampoline253

4/5/2011 2:24 PM PDT

oh, you've decided to continue the book, Sis. Cool!

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JaneAusten

1/31/2010 3:39 PM PST

Haha, thanks. I'll try and write the next chapter soon, but Grandpa died recently and so I havent been able to find time.

spudmurf

1/25/2010 9:29 AM PST

i found a very interrsting story i would like to hear more

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JaneAusten

1/13/2010 10:16 PM PST

Dont worry, Ive since been able to pump out chapters :D

JaneAusten

12/7/2009 9:35 PM PST

Im very very sorry but you wont be getting chapters in a while from me or any other story till February or so. Mum and Dad have decreed that Ive been on the computer too much (like two or three hours a day only!!!) and so I have a technology break. Damn it damn it damn it ...