Book Info
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Project Leader:
RKRickerd
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants (Closed) -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
Short Story
Sci Fi/Fantasy -
Language:
English
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Pirate story (The old Anexx)
Caleigh Malone was a beautiful female pirate and she had taken a huge kings randsom in gold silver and jewels. But an approaching hurricane forced her to bury it on a small island rather than risk losing it at sea in the storm. this story is about Caliegh and her gold as well as a movie being made about her, on the island where she buried the gold. unknown to anyone a drug dealer who lived to become the leader of the drug cartel had found her gold and was using it's hiding place to keep his
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sounds like you're off to a great start, and unless you would REALLY need me personally, certain other projects are occupying my time at the moment.
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Naefear has a point. It doesn't have to be a summary. You might try a question--what if?--to hook readers.
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Before i read it i have to say your blurb is too long and too detailed. I'm sorry but i got bored halfway through. It seems you've just paraphrased your novel here and that kind of makes it pointless to read the first 3/4's of it. shorten it down, make it snappy, it should grab your reader's attention and only hint at the plot to make you want to read on.
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An interesting sort of 'Errol Flynn-meets-Miami Vice'. Should do well if you can sort out the various errors in spelling and grammar.
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You all did a fine job in my opinion ,now lets see what the other writers think of our efforts..Russ
sounds extra- ordinary and mysterious!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!! i love books like these, relating to history!!!!!!!! =)
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So, what I did in the main story section was I added another chapter with Ray Lopez coming onto the scene. In that section. 'Omanh's Chapters' there are two or more chapters kind of sandwiched into that one spot. I hope that it draws some approval as part of the project. For now, it is as much as I can contribute as I am kind of played out with writing as much as I have and trying to balance out my other responsibilites and also to work in a few other areas on WEbook projects. Let me know what folks think. I am beholden and subject to how Russ as project leader and also Rundee, and Raven feel about the contribution. When you get a chance read it over. If you can't find it and have any questions please email me.
Omanh
Omanh
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