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"Po-me" Poetry Part II
"Po-me" stands for "Poor me". This is a collection of empathetic poems that people can read and relate to their own personal problems.
GIVE FEEDBACK
7/28/2009 10:03 AM PDT
I am not submitting anymore work
11/17/2008 1:28 PM PST
As I said in my feedback to Volume I, I tend to shy away from evaluating poetry, except humorous, light-hearted poems, by Dr. Seuss and others of his ilk.
So, rather than commenting on the substance of this anthology, I'll comment on its presentation:
(1) Like Volume I, this anthology is packed with variety, and an abundance of poems by poets who, to my untrained eye, actually have something to say! ;-)
(2) The Project Leader again took some time to organize the poems, alphabetically by author, to aid readers who wanted to refer back to favorites.
Good Luck! nancy
So, rather than commenting on the substance of this anthology, I'll comment on its presentation:
(1) Like Volume I, this anthology is packed with variety, and an abundance of poems by poets who, to my untrained eye, actually have something to say! ;-)
(2) The Project Leader again took some time to organize the poems, alphabetically by author, to aid readers who wanted to refer back to favorites.
Good Luck! nancy
11/17/2008 11:59 AM PST
Good luck. You have my vote.
11/16/2008 9:38 PM PST
goodluck
11/14/2008 10:51 AM PST
KOOL
11/14/2008 7:32 AM PST
you have my vote
11/13/2008 12:13 PM PST
well done
11/13/2008 6:13 AM PST
BEST OF LUCK
11/12/2008 6:40 PM PST
This is very touching and a many I can relate. Good Work and OUSTANDING PIECE! You got my vote!
11/12/2008 9:28 AM PST
amazing i love it
11/10/2008 4:47 AM PST
Fingers crossed for you best of luck
11/10/2008 4:38 AM PST
A very nice piece :-)
11/9/2008 4:59 PM PST
got my vote
11/9/2008 3:10 PM PST
Got my vote!!
11/9/2008 12:14 PM PST
Great book!
11/9/2008 9:57 AM PST
actually the beautiful thing about poetry is that we dont speak using correct grammar, we speak in emotions. everyone comes from different walks of life therefore we our diction differs. what is confusing to some is clear to others.
11/9/2008 8:31 AM PST
I think this is a good poem; however you misuse "lay", which is past tense for "lie". Only in one line did you use it correctly when you wrote "here we'll lie in this bed we made" then next line you switch to "lay" which follows same construction of "we will lie". Change those words and I won't get tripped up on improper use of grammar. A meaningful poem.
11/9/2008 8:00 AM PST
wow this is so well written. please keep it up..you have a thumbs up from me. love it
11/8/2008 8:47 PM PST
best yet
11/8/2008 7:16 PM PST
awesome work I love the poems
11/8/2008 2:28 PM PST
Great! Could use this as some sort of campaign poem for charity!! :D
11/7/2008 9:24 PM PST
Publish!!!!
11/7/2008 1:18 AM PST
Thumbs Up
11/6/2008 11:44 PM PST
Fuck this is good, cheers Welsh
11/6/2008 9:43 PM PST
publish!!
11/6/2008 7:05 PM PST
Thumbs up! Good luck!! :)
11/6/2008 6:31 PM PST
A good luck D on da real
11/6/2008 10:10 AM PST
good luck, with this vote
11/6/2008 4:49 AM PST
Me too:) good luck domunique!!
11/5/2008 8:12 PM PST
Good job all!
11/5/2008 6:41 PM PST
OH and congrats everyone who was in it!!! Good job. Tnanks to all who voted on it!!
11/5/2008 6:40 PM PST
Domunique; just the sheer number of poems submitted for po-me I & II speaks volumes...everyone can relate to emotional pain of one kind or another. lots of talented poets contributed...props to you Dom for introducing this idea for publication and allowing so many to share their heartbeats!
11/5/2008 6:40 PM PST
I hope we get it!!!
11/5/2008 7:13 AM PST
You got mine
11/4/2008 9:53 PM PST
I voted 4 po me poetry! Hope we all win!!
11/4/2008 8:22 PM PST
i got you..cuzz
11/4/2008 7:06 PM PST
Voted for you, good luck
11/4/2008 6:38 PM PST
voted
11/4/2008 4:02 PM PST
my vote's in
11/4/2008 3:23 PM PST
voted
11/4/2008 2:25 PM PST
i voted.
11/4/2008 2:23 PM PST
i voted!!!!! Lord please let barack win and let po-me poetry part ll get published
11/4/2008 1:38 PM PST
i voted...and also enjoyed being part of this project. please please pleeeasse let my poem be published!
11/4/2008 12:41 PM PST
i voted.....
11/4/2008 12:23 PM PST
I voted!
11/4/2008 11:02 AM PST
I voted!!!!!!!
11/4/2008 8:23 AM PST
Great writing. I enjoyed being part of this project.
11/4/2008 8:11 AM PST
great work
11/4/2008 8:03 AM PST
well done great job
11/4/2008 7:54 AM PST
i voted
11/4/2008 7:35 AM PST
i voted..
11/4/2008 6:45 AM PST
YOU KNOW I WAS GOING TO VOTE FOR YOU BOO
11/4/2008 5:44 AM PST
Great Project Dom, Glad I Could Be A Part Of It!
11/4/2008 5:21 AM PST
a great volume with lots of great poems that cover the all parts of human nature. A great example of the good the bad and even at times the UGLY!!!
well done to all who posted their writings! xx
well done to all who posted their writings! xx
11/4/2008 5:14 AM PST
I love all the poems in this volume as well - they draw out the emotions the way that they are supposed to.
11/4/2008 3:25 AM PST
As promised, a vote cast
10/21/2008 9:18 AM PDT
cant wait for voting to START then i can vote for this and prehaps finally get somehing of mine out into the real world.... :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
10/15/2008 2:27 PM PDT
Phew... good thing I finally checked my messages!! I probably wouldn't've[xP] made it if I didn't... I'm glad to still be a part~!!
10/15/2008 1:56 PM PDT
i posted something. i got an invite to po-me I but i never submitted anything. i cant really remeber what these projs r about but i tried my best. hope u like it :D
9/30/2008 7:08 PM PDT
Sorry for the initial decline, but i really meant to join your project, please accept my apology. Thanks for the invite, I would be happy to join.
Tks,
Prince
Tks,
Prince
9/30/2008 11:56 AM PDT
i have a essay in english comp that i'm doing on racism. do you have any experiences/poems/stories/opinions on racism??? If you do i would greatly appreciate if you shared them with me to put in my essay. I'm hoping to have more than my class to read it. So if you have a message to the world, please share.
Thankx,
Karma
p.s.
you can also talk about religious issues.
:)
Thankx,
Karma
p.s.
you can also talk about religious issues.
:)
9/22/2008 8:33 AM PDT
The interrogations have been made and I know that I will have to sacrifice my happiness. You say it is tragic but it is just the path that I ended up taking. Time after time, again and again. it will destroy me but I will still stand through it all as if being in my mind stabbed and punctured to the heart nothing will kill my sole so I refuse. Take me but not the swollen spirit I have been blessed with. The sun is the same in a relative was. Just different. Shorter of breath and one day closer to death
It brings as it revolves. So the paths I take are not to be bad because it will all end anyway.
It brings as it revolves. So the paths I take are not to be bad because it will all end anyway.
9/20/2008 11:22 AM PDT
Reed:
A friend . . . a Loss of tear.. A smile of Freedom
A loss makes a new
Thoughs are my best!
I hope you love them!
A friend . . . a Loss of tear.. A smile of Freedom
A loss makes a new
Thoughs are my best!
I hope you love them!
9/17/2008 7:32 AM PDT
~Thank You~ for the invitation to join your project!!! I look forward to contributing and reading others work.....
~Peace~MzJanice~
~Author~Poetess~
"Heart of Joy"
~Peace~MzJanice~
~Author~Poetess~
"Heart of Joy"
9/15/2008 7:52 AM PDT
Show some love please read my poems!
9/11/2008 1:02 PM PDT
glad to still be a part
9/10/2008 7:05 AM PDT
Okay I finished my poem lol. Wish it was in the 1st but thats okay. Hope u like :D
9/9/2008 11:40 PM PDT
hi everyone, im kind of new
posted two poems, would love feedback!!
thanks!
- sara
posted two poems, would love feedback!!
thanks!
- sara
9/9/2008 10:56 AM PDT
Thank you for the project invite!
-Andrea
-Andrea
9/8/2008 4:23 PM PDT
thanks so much for inviting me to your project:) i highly thank you!
juliet
juliet
9/8/2008 11:32 AM PDT
Thank you for the invite for project, I shall upload something v. soon, I also liked chicken soup for the soul, and I love to look on the positive side of life, mostly my poems relate to past events, and they are getting more positive.
9/7/2008 7:41 PM PDT
By popular demand on this project...Alphabetical order by Author!!! Enjoy
9/5/2008 9:43 PM PDT
THANK YOU
9/5/2008 5:51 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite to join your project
xxx
xxx
9/5/2008 6:11 AM PDT
how do i submit my removed sobmissions on to this one?
9/4/2008 3:08 PM PDT
so....what was that submission thing about????
9/4/2008 1:04 PM PDT
thanks for invite
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