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Participants:
The WEbook community
The WEbook community
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only
Project Leader Only
Format:
Poetry
Poetry
Type:
Fiction
Fiction
Genre:
Literature
Literature
Language:
English
English
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7/27/2008 02:22 PM PT
The Perfect Man's grammar perfect. I was identifying with you. Our writing is similar or perhaps just our experiences. Let me know what you think of mine.
7/27/2008 02:18 PM PT
I see your point in your poem. I have been there before. I feel the author's emotions. The grammar was a bit hard to follow. I suggest a fine tuning to make it flow better.
Thank you for your truth and honesty in the poem. It couldn't have been easy.
Thank you for your truth and honesty in the poem. It couldn't have been easy.
7/24/2008 07:15 PM PT
YOU HAVE TO LOVE YOUR SELF FIRST I LEARNED ONLY ME
CAN MAKE ME CRY OR SMILE
CAN MAKE ME CRY OR SMILE
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