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Tales From The End Of A Long Day
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Bring the End is definitely one of my favorites. You should definitely be published, you have my vote. Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Remission-of-a-Younger-Us
http://www.webook.com/project/Remission-of-a-Younger-Us
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Wow. I love your style. It's unique and explicit. A big yes! If you get the chance to look at my entry "Destini's Trifecta" I'd appreciate that. Good luck ... you deserve to be published.
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"Bring the End" is an amusing, if somewhat pessimistic, look at reality, which reminds me of a short poem I penned recently:
Conditioned to please,
We bend the truth to suit our
listener's deaf ears
Conversation is filled with lies, damn lies, and statistics . . . the static continues daily.
http://www.webook.com/project/Island-Musings
Rock On! nancy
Conditioned to please,
We bend the truth to suit our
listener's deaf ears
Conversation is filled with lies, damn lies, and statistics . . . the static continues daily.
http://www.webook.com/project/Island-Musings
Rock On! nancy
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very well written, a good read, well done
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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fabulous writing and imagery here...
yes to PUBLISH!!!
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
yes to PUBLISH!!!
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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good poems.
i like the descriptiveness of your work!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
i like the descriptiveness of your work!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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Rich - I don't know if just one or all of them deserve a shot, but a yes vote for sure.
I like all of them in a different way, the images, descriptions, and how-fun-they-are-for-me-to-read, all score above average marks from me.
Good Luck!
I like all of them in a different way, the images, descriptions, and how-fun-they-are-for-me-to-read, all score above average marks from me.
Good Luck!
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You touched my emotions with "If I could make love to you"
I felt the pain with "Bring the End"
Very powerful poems, showcasing, powerful talent.
I felt the pain with "Bring the End"
Very powerful poems, showcasing, powerful talent.
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Masterful and amazing as always. I read these all before so now I just have to vote. So I did. These are such great poems - some of the best here.
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