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Tales From The End Of A Long Day
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8/31/2009 1:11 PM PDT
publish
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8/26/2009 3:30 PM PDT
Bring the End is definitely one of my favorites. You should definitely be published, you have my vote. Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Remission-of-a-Younger-Us
http://www.webook.com/project/Remission-of-a-Younger-Us
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8/23/2009 11:38 PM PDT
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8/23/2009 11:37 PM PDT
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8/19/2009 11:54 PM PDT
Wow. I love your style. It's unique and explicit. A big yes! If you get the chance to look at my entry "Destini's Trifecta" I'd appreciate that. Good luck ... you deserve to be published.
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8/14/2009 1:13 PM PDT
"Bring the End" is an amusing, if somewhat pessimistic, look at reality, which reminds me of a short poem I penned recently:
Conditioned to please,
We bend the truth to suit our
listener's deaf ears
Conversation is filled with lies, damn lies, and statistics . . . the static continues daily.
http://www.webook.com/project/Island-Musings
Rock On! nancy
Conditioned to please,
We bend the truth to suit our
listener's deaf ears
Conversation is filled with lies, damn lies, and statistics . . . the static continues daily.
http://www.webook.com/project/Island-Musings
Rock On! nancy
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8/11/2009 1:39 PM PDT
I voted.
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8/9/2009 4:53 AM PDT
very well written, a good read, well done
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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8/6/2009 12:08 AM PDT
fabulous writing and imagery here...
yes to PUBLISH!!!
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
yes to PUBLISH!!!
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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8/5/2009 12:30 PM PDT
good poems.
i like the descriptiveness of your work!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
i like the descriptiveness of your work!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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8/4/2009 5:18 PM PDT
Rich - I don't know if just one or all of them deserve a shot, but a yes vote for sure.
I like all of them in a different way, the images, descriptions, and how-fun-they-are-for-me-to-read, all score above average marks from me.
Good Luck!
I like all of them in a different way, the images, descriptions, and how-fun-they-are-for-me-to-read, all score above average marks from me.
Good Luck!
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8/3/2009 1:46 PM PDT
You touched my emotions with "If I could make love to you"
I felt the pain with "Bring the End"
Very powerful poems, showcasing, powerful talent.
I felt the pain with "Bring the End"
Very powerful poems, showcasing, powerful talent.
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8/3/2009 6:20 AM PDT
To good not to get published. A yes from me.
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8/2/2009 5:31 AM PDT
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8/1/2009 6:01 PM PDT
Masterful and amazing as always. I read these all before so now I just have to vote. So I did. These are such great poems - some of the best here.
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8/1/2009 5:01 PM PDT
well i always find your work masterful, so i hope others do too. best of luck
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