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Project Leader:
erikasargent
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
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Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
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Language:
English
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Your collection certainly has heart, but lacks (for the most part) concrete images to really establish that passion. I think where you do try to use images it is ineffective because you are telling us and not showing. It is assumed that we know what artifacts look like, or even a ship sinking. But consider mentioning the spray of the ocean as it consumes the mast and flag....something to that extent. If you try to add things like that, these will become much more powerful.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
My Hero gets my vote.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you get the time.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you get the time.
i can certainly relate to these, well done, good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
interesting and original writing...
i pray for your brothers safe return.
and what imagination in the 3rd poem!
i vote to PUBLISH!!!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
i pray for your brothers safe return.
and what imagination in the 3rd poem!
i vote to PUBLISH!!!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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