Book Info
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Project Leader:
MarkBrad
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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Poetry Challenge
Start a poem, just the first two lines, see what others can make from them, and comment on the result. All in fun though it can help develop your writing skills, enjoy!
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General:
This whole project is off to a very good start. It is not necessary to comment on each of the authors work as it would be like trying to pick the most beautiful woman in the room filled with all the winners of all the miss universe pagents.
Form:
To be included one must stay with poetry as it is not about prose, and all the authors have done just that. Every one of them has done a superb job of taking the first two lines and making a comprehensive and very interesting poem with them.
with excellent structure and form.
Content:
The poem starts out about an old house, and then from there each of the authors has taken it where their muse led.
Each kept it interesting and compelled the reader to see it to the last word of the last line.
Imagery:
The colorful and clearly defined imagery of each of the pieces is outstanding. We have here three of webooks best, writers shining brightly in this showcase, no doubt more will take part and more will be added as time goes on.
Tone:
It depends on the reader as to the emotions released as surely it will not affect all the same but it is a positive tone.
Musicality:
Each Author evokes a different tune as you read the poetry.
The only thing one can really say in general about it is it is
GREAT!!!!! and deserves more than five stars so I award it ten big ones. I thiink they all are simply fantastic and wonder how many more will join and how many different ways it will spread out into really strange genre's before it is finished.
From the possibilities that in it's self could easily be a long way off yet. I can only express my best wishes and the best of luck to you all. Russ ♫♪♫♪♫♥♥♥
This whole project is off to a very good start. It is not necessary to comment on each of the authors work as it would be like trying to pick the most beautiful woman in the room filled with all the winners of all the miss universe pagents.
Form:
To be included one must stay with poetry as it is not about prose, and all the authors have done just that. Every one of them has done a superb job of taking the first two lines and making a comprehensive and very interesting poem with them.
with excellent structure and form.
Content:
The poem starts out about an old house, and then from there each of the authors has taken it where their muse led.
Each kept it interesting and compelled the reader to see it to the last word of the last line.
Imagery:
The colorful and clearly defined imagery of each of the pieces is outstanding. We have here three of webooks best, writers shining brightly in this showcase, no doubt more will take part and more will be added as time goes on.
Tone:
It depends on the reader as to the emotions released as surely it will not affect all the same but it is a positive tone.
Musicality:
Each Author evokes a different tune as you read the poetry.
The only thing one can really say in general about it is it is
GREAT!!!!! and deserves more than five stars so I award it ten big ones. I thiink they all are simply fantastic and wonder how many more will join and how many different ways it will spread out into really strange genre's before it is finished.
From the possibilities that in it's self could easily be a long way off yet. I can only express my best wishes and the best of luck to you all. Russ ♫♪♫♪♫♥♥♥
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