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Participants:
The WEbook community
The WEbook community
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only
Project Leader Only
Format:
Collection
Collection
Type:
Fiction
Fiction
Genre:
Literature
Literature
Language:
English
English
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12/24/2008 08:41 AM PT
Problem with that is, that doesn't sound anything like me. The way I write is naturally rather self-deprecating. "Youthful years" and "soothe my soul" just don't seem to be anything I'd write. Thanks for the advice though. Very enlightening and practical.
12/12/2008 04:48 PM PT
No one wants to read a project that introduces itself with self pity. I suggest you rewrite your introduction, changing "I am not a very good poet but oh well..."
Maybe use:
A collection of poems I have written over my youthful years.
Poetry from a non-poet is exactly what you think. I am not a conventional poet, but ocassionally I write poetry to soothe my soul.
Maybe use:
A collection of poems I have written over my youthful years.
Poetry from a non-poet is exactly what you think. I am not a conventional poet, but ocassionally I write poetry to soothe my soul.
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