I love the poem, "Life." Really magical, and grasps the true meaning of it. You are a wonderful writer, and I applaud you for your risks in this field.

Publish!

~Kate

Good Work I especially like the poem on Fear for you tell it exacly as it is. A yes vpte from me


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I like some of the truth you portray in Facades. Like when one thinks negatively, a negative atmosphere engulfs them. Also nice imagery dealing with the camera :p

I really like your explanation of what fear is in Fear. It's also amazing that we are the one's who create fear in ourselves, whether we should or shouldn't. I guess this ties in with the notion that we hold the keys to our happiness. It was well written.

Life was somewhat depressing, but there was a truth to it. It was clever too.

Well done you have my vote.

life seems moe like song lyrics Which is a cmpliment   I love your rythmn
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Very nice!

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thank you.

Some beautiful imagery in these poems - a yes vote from me.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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These poems are examinations of truths.  I am fondest of "Fear."  Is a word missing from the following line in your poem "Life"?

"You know what it's like_?_envy."