Poetry and thoughts on Romance and Relationships...

This will be my works of poetry and my insightful thoughts on romance and relationships.

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abdi

7/29/2008 10:28 AM PDT

"when you touch me" is not as good as the other one,in this poem theres a lack of repation and i think after reading the first one i think you can do alot better.

abdi

7/29/2008 10:22 AM PDT

wow wow i think that was the best poem ive read so far please for the sake of poetry keep writting cause i think u can truly become a great poet,if not the greatest poet.