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butchoy
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English
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Poetry of a boy's life
Most, if not all, of my poems are love poems, some of it are lyrical poems because I'm a songwriter too.
In this collection I do not just limit my self to poetry, but I also included my songs, quotes, and prose.
This is my attempt to compile all of my poems and other writings. This would be an emotional roller coaster for me and maybe the future reader too.
In this collection I do not just limit my self to poetry, but I also included my songs, quotes, and prose.
This is my attempt to compile all of my poems and other writings. This would be an emotional roller coaster for me and maybe the future reader too.
GIVE FEEDBACK
You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
you can kill the grammer but there is such a thing as overkill. try not to take it to the extremes unless that's your goal
(ex. Bad_Grammer) sometimes weird things are nescicary when writing poetry
(ex. Bad_Grammer) sometimes weird things are nescicary when writing poetry
Good Day
I hope that you - being one of the 25 who were supposed to be included as one of the winners of the vote process will complain - there were 540 projects in the competition - 54 were supposed to be chosen but webook took less than half in order to cut their work load. They told me that they chose ten percent of the projects which received more than 10 votes.
I hope you will let them know, just as i have, what you think of their unethical behavior.
I hope that you - being one of the 25 who were supposed to be included as one of the winners of the vote process will complain - there were 540 projects in the competition - 54 were supposed to be chosen but webook took less than half in order to cut their work load. They told me that they chose ten percent of the projects which received more than 10 votes.
I hope you will let them know, just as i have, what you think of their unethical behavior.
eee. choy .. kakacheck ko lng, and lapit lng .. ee grr, sayang nMn, hMmp. after four months pa ung nxt voting .. baka ibig sabihin ni God, dagdagan mo pa daw ng konti. hehe tapos magiging best seller n .. eee 5:33 am n d2, bye mwuah..
ps. ngalit ata sA akin ung guy, hMm, well, if we're not meant to be, we're not meant to be, riGHt?
ps. ngalit ata sA akin ung guy, hMm, well, if we're not meant to be, we're not meant to be, riGHt?
@nrhatch: thanks for your criticism, it just shows that you really have read my work...But again, as what I have learned from my literature and journalism class, in poetry or/and in songs you have the license to kill the grammar.
In the case of L.P.S., it's actually a song, so this really calls for that license to kill the grammar for the composer to be more satisfied with the melody of the song. Just like the "Beatles", if you examine some or if not many of their songs, you will find that they have grammatical errors too.
Now while grammar is somehow considerable in poetry, typographical error is not. :)
In the case of L.P.S., it's actually a song, so this really calls for that license to kill the grammar for the composer to be more satisfied with the melody of the song. Just like the "Beatles", if you examine some or if not many of their songs, you will find that they have grammatical errors too.
Now while grammar is somehow considerable in poetry, typographical error is not. :)
I voted for this earlier in the week. At that point in time, I was not providing written feedback unless my vote was a resounding "publish," because it appeared that many of the project leaders did not want to hear anything other than, "this is great!" or "this is the best!"
Before submitting a project for the vote, you should do a final proofread of each submission in the project to ensure that you are presenting every poem in the best light possible.
I feel that was not done in this case. For example, in LPS:
From the day that I saw you -- past tense
I think you are so beautiful -- present tense
and even though you don't care for me
but my heart is full of symphony -- the "but" is unnecessary
Keep at it. Sound like you have quite a few fans. nancy
Before submitting a project for the vote, you should do a final proofread of each submission in the project to ensure that you are presenting every poem in the best light possible.
I feel that was not done in this case. For example, in LPS:
From the day that I saw you -- past tense
I think you are so beautiful -- present tense
and even though you don't care for me
but my heart is full of symphony -- the "but" is unnecessary
Keep at it. Sound like you have quite a few fans. nancy
look within you, dig your soul, taste the feeling so it may show-
loved that bit. Nice message. Here's my vote
loved that bit. Nice message. Here's my vote
I really wish you the best, no matter the outcome keep learning and polishing your skills.
hayyy..touching..bcoz i know u..keep up d good work..improve urself a lot..but d success is in d Lord..keep also ur promises, act it and He will act on u..
Sorry but I don't feel this is good enough to publish. The emotion is there but not the skill in expressing it professionally.
lol john
lol john
nakalimutan kong mag vote .. hehe anyways gOod luck po.. pag napublish at naging rich ka na, wag mo akong kakalimutan ha.. hehe visit kA nun d2 sa sydney [= hehe
lovely poems I love it it is just amazing it touched me its good when feelings get involved that means your work is awesome if it doesn't get published I think I would be mad!
lovely poems I love it it is just amazing it touched me its good when feelings get involved that means your work is awesome if it doesn't get published I think I would be mad!
Hi Choy,
It's great, i love it, specially the Mommy's boy.
I was touched... i love you son. I'm just here if
you need me.
It's great, i love it, specially the Mommy's boy.
I was touched... i love you son. I'm just here if
you need me.
Awesome writing please take look at mine and vote for me email me and I’ll give the link
You Are A Very Creative Communicator Brah, You've Got My Vote And Good Look Man!
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