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butchoy
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Poetry
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Poetry of a boy's life

A compilation of poems about my life since I began writing poems

Most, if not all, of my poems are love poems, some of it are lyrical poems because I'm a songwriter too.

In this collection I do not just limit my self to poetry, but I also included my songs, quotes, and prose.

This is my attempt to compile all of my poems and other writings. This would be an emotional roller coaster for me and maybe the future reader too.

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wenniepoo

4/19/2009 7:07 PM PDT

great pure work...

jimmybonez

4/14/2009 6:59 PM PDT

nice work...
good-luck...

naiveandwitty

4/8/2009 4:47 PM PDT

good work.

pattimari

4/8/2009 2:14 PM PDT

I vote to publish

thevoice

4/7/2009 10:38 AM PDT

great caring write my friend great work mike

thevoice

4/7/2009 10:37 AM PDT

Take flight my friend mike good luck mike

KINGLOVERR

4/6/2009 10:16 AM PDT

You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.

LunaWolfe

12/23/2008 6:42 PM PST

you can kill the grammer but there is such a thing as overkill. try not to take it to the extremes unless that's your goal
(ex. Bad_Grammer) sometimes weird things are nescicary when writing poetry

Gadiel

11/22/2008 9:49 PM PST

Good Day
I hope that you - being one of the 25 who were supposed to be included as one of the winners of the vote process will complain - there were 540 projects in the competition - 54 were supposed to be chosen but webook took less than half in order to cut their work load. They told me that they chose ten percent of the projects which received more than 10 votes.
I hope you will let them know, just as i have, what you think of their unethical behavior.

butchoy

11/20/2008 6:06 AM PST

siguro nga....:(

Capulet

11/19/2008 10:34 AM PST

eee. choy .. kakacheck ko lng, and lapit lng .. ee grr, sayang nMn, hMmp. after four months pa ung nxt voting .. baka ibig sabihin ni God, dagdagan mo pa daw ng konti. hehe tapos magiging best seller n .. eee 5:33 am n d2, bye mwuah..

ps. ngalit ata sA akin ung guy, hMm, well, if we're not meant to be, we're not meant to be, riGHt?

butchoy

11/19/2008 7:49 AM PST

@nrhatch: thanks for your criticism, it just shows that you really have read my work...But again, as what I have learned from my literature and journalism class, in poetry or/and in songs you have the license to kill the grammar.

In the case of L.P.S., it's actually a song, so this really calls for that license to kill the grammar for the composer to be more satisfied with the melody of the song. Just like the "Beatles", if you examine some or if not many of their songs, you will find that they have grammatical errors too.

Now while grammar is somehow considerable in poetry, typographical error is not. :)

Mulbry

11/18/2008 10:33 PM PST

Good luck!

nrhatch

11/17/2008 2:14 PM PST

I voted for this earlier in the week. At that point in time, I was not providing written feedback unless my vote was a resounding "publish," because it appeared that many of the project leaders did not want to hear anything other than, "this is great!" or "this is the best!"

Before submitting a project for the vote, you should do a final proofread of each submission in the project to ensure that you are presenting every poem in the best light possible.

I feel that was not done in this case. For example, in LPS:

From the day that I saw you -- past tense
I think you are so beautiful -- present tense

and even though you don't care for me
but my heart is full of symphony -- the "but" is unnecessary

Keep at it. Sound like you have quite a few fans. nancy

glenda82

11/17/2008 3:22 AM PST

look within you, dig your soul, taste the feeling so it may show-
loved that bit. Nice message. Here's my vote

EdMeligIndustan

11/16/2008 4:22 PM PST

Hey Bukchoy,

Hope you'd get published. Ngiti naman, o.

writer122

11/14/2008 7:31 AM PST

you have my vote

zion

11/13/2008 6:01 AM PST

I really wish you the best, no matter the outcome keep learning and polishing your skills.

pastorajuliet

11/12/2008 8:30 PM PST

hayyy..touching..bcoz i know u..keep up d good work..improve urself a lot..but d success is in d Lord..keep also ur promises, act it and He will act on u..

johntucker

11/12/2008 4:45 PM PST

Sorry but I don't feel this is good enough to publish. The emotion is there but not the skill in expressing it professionally.

lol john

naiveandwitty

11/12/2008 8:59 AM PST

A truly fantastic project.

amanra

11/12/2008 6:02 AM PST

Interesting work, good luck

alienscribe

11/11/2008 10:20 PM PST

Got my vote, go for it!

VONTAE

11/11/2008 8:24 AM PST

publish this good luck voted for u

Capulet

11/10/2008 6:41 AM PST

nakalimutan kong mag vote .. hehe anyways gOod luck po.. pag napublish at naging rich ka na, wag mo akong kakalimutan ha.. hehe visit kA nun d2 sa sydney [= hehe

dantesfire

11/10/2008 4:46 AM PST

Nice collection good luck

Destane

11/8/2008 7:22 PM PST

lovely poems I love it it is just amazing it touched me its good when feelings get involved that means your work is awesome if it doesn't get published I think I would be mad!

Destane

11/8/2008 7:21 PM PST

lovely poems I love it it is just amazing it touched me its good when feelings get involved that means your work is awesome if it doesn't get published I think I would be mad!