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   written with Great hearted passion beauty my friend love feelds in your words care shows in ypur work  great poems God Bless mike

I  voted for you

It's a pleasure to vote for you my friend-good luck!

Simply beautiful, all three of them.

I can not tell you how pleased I am to have stumbled upon your entries and can assure you that I will most certainly be looking at more of your works in the future.

May I wish you the very best of luck with the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries

This is really good! It's inspiring!

I vote for you

One of the basic needs for living is affection.  It is great to read such loving words, easy to understand and warming to the heart.  What a great guy!!!

God Bless You Michael, your work is worthy, love Wennie xxxhugs

they are all beautiful...i had to come back and read again. love's blind devotion speaks completely to my heart; there is only One deserving this deep devotion for this is worship and no human  is worthy of worship except Jesus. May we all love so purely, so truly so humbly. Bless you Michael.

beautiful, i wish you the best, and i hope  something of yours gets picked, You and I, Lord is my favorite.

please check mine out:
http://webook.com/project/Love-You-Fill-A-World

Beautiful.

All the best,

~t.

These are wonderful... you wrote these beautifully,
Well done

I vote publish

You have straight from the heart beautiful. It appears you have the heart of an angel.

Brilliant!
cuddie

Each piece was very well written.

My favourite was Love's Blind Devotion as it's imagery was exquisite and the emotion was deep.

You have my vote :)

Good work! Thanks for the read. Good Luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/Heart-Whispers

Publish

It's nice to read positive, uplifting stuff.  Glad you shared!

great poetry!  your faith shines through your writing...keep it up!
I hope your pieces get published!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School

I love reading ur work as they are very uplifting - You've got my vote

My favorite verse:

Walking on the tides,
   washing in the waves,
      sit with me on the rocky shores.
Let our plans be made
   and watch the heavens parade
      their glorious splendor.

Your poems are lovely!  I particularly enjoyed The Secrets of Your Heart.

Write on!

I like these but the third one is my favourite.
Good luck.


http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you have the time.

Got my vote.
I liked 'You and I,Lord' the most.

If you got time,check out mine;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun

Publish! Publish! Publish! *#*

Love them especially the last two, so heartfelt and true

definately publish

Hello Michael, firstly you and I lord, my youngest child was born with airway disease, from 9wks old he had a tracheostomy, he lost his voice/cry for almost 2yrs, but he spoke in many other ways, ways my heart and eyes heard, as for the blind well people with perfect vision struggle to find the true light, this I believe is why it's called insight, I liked the message very much, continuing through your collection I enjoyed the other two, there's a flair in your timing and choice of words that I liked, I wish you luck in the vote, thumbs up here, hugs Dante

Hi Michael-
To begin, I just wanted to say thank you for what you said on my poems. I am glad that you can see the potential of them.

Second, your poems are truly beautiful, and I really connected with them. I would love to read more! I did like the part where you said, "You are to me like the light to a blind man." I could see what you were saying here...that it's refreshing and a miracle.

If not obvious, you got a publish vote from me! I loved them!
~Kate

Thank you LODY for taking the time to read my poem. I am going to give you an insight to the two verses' you eluded to in your review. I must first apologize for being so vague, I was trying to be subtle. I can only offer two examples of where light  for the blind and sound for the deaf apply logically.
1) Not all blind and deaf persons have been deaf for life, it goes both ways; senses have been restored as well as lost during the course of lifetimes. Even those who never in their natural lifetimes experience light or sound; then I would have to argue that their spirits remember before time , light and sound. That is unless you believe the spirit was created for the body; I believe the body was created for the spirits use.

And...

2) Sometimes it is what we CANNOT have that we want the most. There could be a message here.

I do hope you will read this piece over again and reflect with an openness of spirit, grasshoper.

Thanks again... Till next time...

well a couple of the lines contradict the piece... "You are to me as the light to a blind man"  and "sound to the deaftened"... That would mean that he is nothing to you. because if you think about it... the blind cannot see the light. and the deaf cannot hear sound.. unless you are trying to come across as meaning that it's there though you may not know it. But, if you go with that route.........  the blind cannot see light.. only dark, and the deaf cannot hear sound if it is there, but if there is no sound there.. then there was nothing to be listening for.. no matter how keen the ear.

publish for sure!!!!!!




http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you.

Michael, your poems touch the hearts of those open to the beliefs and feelings expressed.  I'm glad you stopped by my project and pointed me to yours.  A definite yes vote from me.

Thanks, I am honored Russ.
It means a lot to me to get your vote. I am almost a winner already in a way; a bunch of people have read my stuff. TY again, everyone!

Publish it deserves it, it is classic free verse prose

I very much liked your poem You and I, Lord. It is very moving.

you got my vote

Wow! I love free verse and you write it exceptionally well.
Good Luck,
J. Louise

http://www.webook.com/project/what-I-have-to-say

Publish.  Good luck Michael.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

i really like your poems. great job. you have my vote

Very nice job. I loved all three poems. The sincere passion and love you feel when reading it's just fantastic. You have a gift for poetry, I can see. You definetly have my vote! To publish that is.

By the way, thank you for the encouraging feedback you left my project. It is certainly appreciated.

A yes vote.

Good luck Michael :). Your talent surely deserves an audience, i hope you get published.

you've got my vote.  blessings, my brother.

DONE! good luck!

To anyone who is following my work here on WeBook:

   I am considering this three poem project for the vote.
My project at:

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Heart-of-Michael

         It is still in contention for the vote and may well be the entry I submit. However, as I can only submit one, 3 poem project , I would like to hear from you. Then I have a choice to make. Please leave me a comment on what you feel is my best work. links to my other works here on WeBook are below:

http://www.webook.com/project/free-reviews
http://www.webook.com/project/free-reviews-2
http://www.webook.com/project/The-SpiritTalker-Chronicle
http://www.webook.com/project/Bleeding-Teardrops-in-a-Healing-Well
http://www.webook.com/project/Heart-of-Love

I hope you will comment,
Until then....Good luck everyone!

Sorry. Not interested. I may read, because I find Christianity fasinating, but I'm pagan and have no wish to read things such as this.

I wish you good luck in the voting.