The description of your work sounds very intriguing, I am looking forward to the read.

Just marking this so I can find it later. Looks interesting.

JasonDuncan, you might be interested in reading chapter 4 - given what you said about your great great grandfather .. no offence though ... its why I included that subject matter in that chapter and I find it amusing.

BipolarBrit I used to work with psyhco geriatrics ... i know they need something to look forward to so I'm flattered that I am the nursing home's entertainment!  I hope the old dears get a great laugh, and that it brightens their days.  I am sure you are the right personality to deliver it to them too and I bet you do a wicked Scottish accent.  I wondered where you were though.  I am trying to clean up the remaining chapters, so that I can get on with finding an agent.

Very interesting. My Great, Great Grandfather was from Scotland.
Intrigueing project and personality.

I have a slight confession to make. I'm no longer reading this on my computer.

I'm not even reading it on the fancy mobile phone I have which can access to the internet but which I've not fully worked out how to use yet.

No, I'm reading to the people I work with...

Let me try and explain... I work for a nursing home and have recently had a couple of new admissions. One is born and bred Scottish and so I decided to start reading her Prickly Scots.

S - You're now the unofficial star of the home! Hurry up and get fecking published so I can actually buy a several copies and not feel guilty about printing it out!

I'll definitely be checking this out!

What a blast off story; rather out there so original. Jen well she must have done some bad shit in her past life, she sounds all f***k up. Great writing.

Good one

Please do ... I'll look forward to your company!

Sounds great. I'll check it out soon!

Humph ... what is it about Devon? ... one of my first fans (oh I do love to say that!) is from Devon ... thanks for reading!

Sound's like a really good read. I'll let you know when i've finnished reading!
Very well done!

I'm glad you noticed; this particular character in real life is a person of no honour or integrity; is misguided, and to be pitied. 

She made for wonderful inspiration here though, and the situations she gets into; as unlikely as they might sound, are largely true to life.  Keep reading, and you'll find out the fate that befalls her ... one for all time ... and one that if her character's spirit can see, will humiliate her for an eternity.

Oh dear that Jen she really sounds like a very unpleasant creature, I could feel the depth of the despair especially if she knew the truth of how the town views her.  Tell me dose she go to hairdressing school so that perhaps she can improve or a counselor? That poor poor creature. I just can not get her image out of my mined those teeth, your detailed imagery of her was so real. Well thought out and great with the visuals well done . reading chapter 18 maid me lough, and gave me chiles,
well done.  You have a good sense of hummer and that leaps of the pages.

sounds like an awesome idea!