Book Info
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Project Leader:
hitogoroshi
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
Short Story
Literary -
Language:
English
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Pure Dialogue
[New submissions should go to "Pure Dialogue Project 2!". If there's a great work here you want in a published copy, ask about "Pure Dialogue for Publication."]
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Mike: I am really confused.
Mike: Because we have the same name?
Mike: No, because we look alike.
Mike: We do?
Mike: Don't you think?
Mike: But you have a chubby face.
Mike: Are you talking to me?
Mike: I thought I was but I didn't realize I was looking in the mirror.
Mike: Oh, Is that a mirror?
Mike: You didn't know?
Mike: I thought there were four of us.
Mike: Hold on, I'm getting confused, who delivered the last line?
Mike: I did.
Mike: You did?
Mike: Are you trying to confuse me?
Mike: You have a chubby face.
Mike: You have a chubby..
Mike: Are you going to insult me?
Mike: I would never insult your chubby figure.
Mike: If we look so alike, how comes you never get women but I do?
Mike: Your standards are lower.
Mike: They are.
Mike: That's not what your wife said.
Mike: You slept with the Mother of my kids?
Mike: Your kids?
Mike: Yeah, don't try it. They even look like me.
Mike: But less Chubby.
Mike: You've got a point.
Mike: Because we have the same name?
Mike: No, because we look alike.
Mike: We do?
Mike: Don't you think?
Mike: But you have a chubby face.
Mike: Are you talking to me?
Mike: I thought I was but I didn't realize I was looking in the mirror.
Mike: Oh, Is that a mirror?
Mike: You didn't know?
Mike: I thought there were four of us.
Mike: Hold on, I'm getting confused, who delivered the last line?
Mike: I did.
Mike: You did?
Mike: Are you trying to confuse me?
Mike: You have a chubby face.
Mike: You have a chubby..
Mike: Are you going to insult me?
Mike: I would never insult your chubby figure.
Mike: If we look so alike, how comes you never get women but I do?
Mike: Your standards are lower.
Mike: They are.
Mike: That's not what your wife said.
Mike: You slept with the Mother of my kids?
Mike: Your kids?
Mike: Yeah, don't try it. They even look like me.
Mike: But less Chubby.
Mike: You've got a point.
Interesting concept.
But I thionk its hard to write a truley successful story without the help of prose.
But I thionk its hard to write a truley successful story without the help of prose.
viktoriaxvicious: This Is Halloween
viktoriaxvicious: HALLOWEEN HALLOWEEN
viktoriaxvicious: Halloween Halloween.
Jamie Smithhart: *raises eyeborw*
viktoriaxvicious: ^-^
viktoriaxvicious: In this town we call home, everyone hale to the pumpkin song!
Jamie Smithhart: o.O Uhmm...yeah...I've got to go....take out the trash or something....
*Jamie Smithhart has now signed off.*
viktoriaxvicious: HALLOWEEN HALLOWEEN
viktoriaxvicious: Halloween Halloween.
Jamie Smithhart: *raises eyeborw*
viktoriaxvicious: ^-^
viktoriaxvicious: In this town we call home, everyone hale to the pumpkin song!
Jamie Smithhart: o.O Uhmm...yeah...I've got to go....take out the trash or something....
*Jamie Smithhart has now signed off.*
Bummer, I missed getting in on this one. I guess I should post to the Pure Dialogue 2 bit.
I wonder why Firefox thinks dialogue is spelled incorrectly.
I wonder why Firefox thinks dialogue is spelled incorrectly.
you could copy and paste an aim conversation...now those are stories in and of themselves!
"Cool, James! Come look at this!"
"What's that?"
"A book of short stories, written in pure dialogue."
"Sounds neat. Do I have a clean uniform for work today?"
"Yeah, it's in the dryer."
"Would you turn off the computer and grab it for me, I'm going to be late?"
*sigh*
*click*
"What's that?"
"A book of short stories, written in pure dialogue."
"Sounds neat. Do I have a clean uniform for work today?"
"Yeah, it's in the dryer."
"Would you turn off the computer and grab it for me, I'm going to be late?"
*sigh*
*click*
What a cool idea! I've never tried this but look forward to it- and to reading what everyone has submitted.
Kiss Of The Spider Woman by Manuel Puig.
There are a few pages of police/prison documents but, other than that, the whole book is nothing but dialog. It's really quite phenomenal.
There are a few pages of police/prison documents but, other than that, the whole book is nothing but dialog. It's really quite phenomenal.
I've been having trouble with this kind of thing myself. Seem to want to tell everything without much dialogue. Find myself going back to add it in all the time.
I find this to be an interesting idea... it is engaging for the people participating and keeps you on your toes!
GREAT idea for a thread. I found this page randomly using "StumleUpon" and have now joined the site. Dialogue is my weak spot and this is an excellent method of practice!
Hey, just joined the site. I'll try and write my idea for the prologue to my children's novel into this!
Once upon a time there was a library on the campus of a big university. The university had a very beautiful redwood forest where banana slugs roamed freely uninhibited by any salt on unappreciative people.
I really enjoyed being dropped into the middle of plans currently underway to use some new technology that would change the world....how refreshing....unexpected....riveting....very nice approach.
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