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Project Leader:
LizHorning
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Poetry -
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Language:
English
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Reminiscences
My Poetry Submission
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I really like that day because it really brought out some emotion in me and I could actually feel the sense of loss. It was very descriptive to the point that I almost could feel the blow dryer.
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With exception to "Snow Bunny," this collection does not offer much originality. I think the first two poems lack imagery and emotion.
Consider giving us a glimpse of specific details from the dance or the lover. What do the people look like? Where is the sweat beading? Clothes? Anything that will bring the scene to life.
Again, this is well accomplished in Snow Bunny and I only wish to see more of that.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Consider giving us a glimpse of specific details from the dance or the lover. What do the people look like? Where is the sweat beading? Clothes? Anything that will bring the scene to life.
Again, this is well accomplished in Snow Bunny and I only wish to see more of that.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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Nicely done, I especially liked Dance.....
please...http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
please...http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
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Great poetry. Great style, and ideas. I loved dance; I felt really involved in it, so to say. Got my vote.
=) lucy
=) lucy
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I'm linking them all, very much. Voted for these. Good luck.
Bud
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
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Bud
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
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Forgot to mention:
If you want to look at my submission it is here:
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poems-For-a-Poetry-Contest
If you want to look at my submission it is here:
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poems-For-a-Poetry-Contest
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I really like "Dance", it has expression an energy.
"Snow Bunny" is also good, simple but touching.
"That Day" is my less favorite of the 3, it did not grip my attention though it flows well.
Yes vote.
"Snow Bunny" is also good, simple but touching.
"That Day" is my less favorite of the 3, it did not grip my attention though it flows well.
Yes vote.
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I like the energy in all three poems, really some fantastic cadence there. You've got my vote!
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
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I liked the heartfelt way in which these were written and especially snowbunny. The first was energetic and exciting, the second a love letter almost, and the imagery of the third very realistic and slightly disturbing. Good job and good luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked
http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked
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Musicality:
sorry hit the submit button by accident.
the music should surely be the tennessee Waltz.
http://www.webook.com/project/my-entry-for-the-poetry-vote
sorry hit the submit button by accident.
the music should surely be the tennessee Waltz.
http://www.webook.com/project/my-entry-for-the-poetry-vote
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General:
Very well done piece of prose
Form:
free verse prose, well written
Content:
the first piece is about dance and the excitement of two people involved in dancing.
Imagery:
Very good imagery as well as a very smooth flow that transports you gently to the ending phrase.
Very well done piece of prose
Form:
free verse prose, well written
Content:
the first piece is about dance and the excitement of two people involved in dancing.
Imagery:
Very good imagery as well as a very smooth flow that transports you gently to the ending phrase.
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a yes vote from me!!!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
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