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RCRose

8/31/2009 6:14 PM PDT

I really like that day because it really brought out some emotion in me and I could actually feel the sense of loss. It was very descriptive to the point that I almost could feel the blow dryer.

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weepingwillow

8/27/2009 10:25 PM PDT

With exception to "Snow Bunny," this collection does not offer much originality. I think the first two poems lack imagery and emotion.

Consider giving us a glimpse of specific details from the dance or the lover. What do the people look like? Where is the sweat beading? Clothes? Anything that will bring the scene to life.

Again, this is well accomplished in Snow Bunny and I only wish to see more of that.

Good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

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Jenny_Moxham

8/27/2009 5:52 PM PDT

Good poems. Voted.

Feel free to check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

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santackas

8/26/2009 9:49 AM PDT

Nicely done, I especially liked Dance.....

please...http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems

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shahw

8/23/2009 10:24 AM PDT

Loved them...voted. Shah. X

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

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LucyHart

8/22/2009 9:09 PM PDT

Great poetry. Great style, and ideas. I loved dance; I felt really involved in it, so to say. Got my vote.
=) lucy

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penbuddy

8/19/2009 10:55 AM PDT

I'm linking them all, very much. Voted for these. Good luck.

Bud

http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems

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arceyed

8/18/2009 2:02 AM PDT

Publish.

Please;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun

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moxhp

8/17/2009 9:18 PM PDT

Well done. All good poems.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

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naiveandwitty

8/15/2009 9:45 AM PDT

great work!

publish!

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Eviefay

8/14/2009 4:00 PM PDT

Liked your poems. A yes vote from me.

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irena_pasvin

8/12/2009 8:31 AM PDT

Forgot to mention:
If you want to look at my submission it is here:
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poems-For-a-Poetry-Contest

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irena_pasvin

8/12/2009 8:29 AM PDT

I really like "Dance", it has expression an energy.
"Snow Bunny" is also good, simple but touching.
"That Day" is my less favorite of the 3, it did not grip my attention though it flows well.
Yes vote.

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Sabrabean

8/10/2009 6:26 AM PDT

I like the energy in all three poems, really some fantastic cadence there. You've got my vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry

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SPMount

8/10/2009 12:10 AM PDT

I liked the heartfelt way in which these were written and especially snowbunny. The first was energetic and exciting, the second a love letter almost, and the imagery of the third very realistic and slightly disturbing. Good job and good luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked

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RKRickerd

8/9/2009 8:34 PM PDT

Musicality:
sorry hit the submit button by accident.

the music should surely be the tennessee Waltz.

http://www.webook.com/project/my-entry-for-the-poetry-vote

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RKRickerd

8/9/2009 8:31 PM PDT

General:
Very well done piece of prose

Form:
free verse prose, well written

Content:
the first piece is about dance and the excitement of two people involved in dancing.

Imagery:
Very good imagery as well as a very smooth flow that transports you gently to the ending phrase.

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