I'll be back to read this, I love "dirty" novels. :)
Hahah.

I absolutely love the new overview. Much better and more compelling. Excellent. Eventhough I know already that this story is fantastic.

Sounds cool!  I'll read it.

I agree with kklove.  I don't remember what exactly you had before, but it caught my attention a lot more than this.

I liked the other overview better than: Yes! Rose thought, "This is what I've been looking for." just my opinion though, and its just an overview.

-kklove08

First the story plot sounds wonderful, and secondly the cover is really something, really cool!

Thank you SilentDaVinci... all the credit goes to CGBM a fellow webooker.

~t.

You're cover is gorgeous! Can't wait to read.

this book is incredible!!!!! i cant wait to read the rest of it.....im utterly captivated!

Sounds very good!

Wow this sounds awesome

I cant wait to read this book it sounds amazing

I've read the first few chapters of this work, and I am completely captivated! I can't wait to see what will happen next - I've put all my other reading on hold just to finish reading your work in progress.

I love the way your characters are moving clearly, and not standing like stagnant water. Their personalities are very real, and when I'm reading I can see them clearly in my mind.

Your descriptions are extremely vivid - it really places the reader in the story, it's almost like an automated Sims game: instead of controlling the characters, all you can do is watch and wonder what they'll get up to next; whether it be good or bad.

If this will be your first complete full-length novel, I can't wait for the projects to follow. Can't wait to read more!

Good luck with finishing this - we're all waiting in excited anticipation :)

Dear Readers,

Thank you all for your support of my book, Innocence in Sin. It is truly inspirational seeing so much positive and constructive feedback. It is an honor to share and develop my characters with all of you.

Now that Finals are finished I plan to post more often as my goal is to finish this book by the end of summer. (It will be my first completed full length novel.) I trust that you will all hold me accountable which is a big reason why I am writing it here on this website.

Again thank you all for your comments and continual support.

~t.

This is by far the best book in progress I have read on Webook so far. I have it bookmarked and I come to it weekly in hopes that there will be a new chapter. I love it. Please dont stop writing this. I am in love with Kameron by the way.

sounds great

Appealing!!! I'll give it a read!!

Very captivating

interesting

I hope to get some feedback from you. All constructive criticism is welcome.

Take care,

~ t.

sounds good