I think that these should have been gone over a couple times more. some lines seem wordy and drawn out, which also throws the rythm off.  for example, the first piece has YOU ARE, it should just be YOU'RE. it makes it sound better and it won't stumble.  and the second to last stanza in the last piece has for fate has decided them to die.... to me that just doesn't make sense. I think that you may want to go through these again and touch them up. They aren't bad, but could be much better. If you need any help I will be sure to give you a few tips. Just message me and I will do what I can.

But at this time I have to give this a thumbs down. I wish you luck.

A yes vote from me.

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

This were quite empowering and meaningful. Glad you messaged me about your submitting.

~AJR

I vote publish.

Well done... Voted.

If you've time...http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

;-) X

The poems have a lot of meaning to them. I have never had experience with these issues but I can see the pain that it brings upon its victims.

http://www.webook.com/project/Dirge-of-Mortality

i voted

very interesting work here well done



http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

some good causes here... (If you are writing non-fiction, just remember, people can be cruel to everyone and anyone, so do not take it personally.)

i vote  YES!!!

if you want to read mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

A yes from me.....good job!

You write with true excellents! Lots of passions in your poems :).Half way through reading "Blindness hope" I had to stop! It was too emotional and brought a lump to my throat. "VERY" sad! I know of a little boy who was born blind, deaf and now also wheelchair bound. He laughs through the hand of others touch and smiles with the smells of something nice. I said to my friend once " It's heartbreaking! he is such a lovely little boy!... If only he could see or hear? She said " but he can't miss what he has never experienced - this is normal life for him" - he is happy in his own way! Now, when I see him, I am just happy to be in his company and my own children play with him to make him laugh! :). Very best of luck with your poems my friend.
From the UK - Mahoney X

Great poems!

I voted yes, even though there were some spelling and grammatical errors.

For example in your second poem, I think you meant, "With blinded eyes I never got TO see" rather than what you have.
Simple things like that could throw of the reader, so you might want to revise them after the vote is over!

Otherwise, wonder, inspiring poems. PUBLISH!
~Kate

These three got my vote. Publish!

nice work. :) voted

A yes vote.