The Star Kingdom Saga I: In The Beginning

It is 2452, Earth and its allies are coming ever closer to ending a ongoing war with the brutal world conquering Zeltrons. Famed Scientist Jacob Revis decides to bring in his newly created shock troopers into the war for the final battle and test their worth. As time goes on The Federation learns that the Zeltrons aren't their only enemies in the universe.

First Sergeant Jayden Alexander and his squad of Shock Troopers are just coming out of their training and are thrown into a war between the Intergalactic Federation and the world conquering Zeltrons. Knowing only that the Federation is on the brink of total destruction they are sent to the war torn planet of Controus V to hopefully end the war and bring peace to the alliance.

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black_flame

3/30/2011 11:49 AM PDT

I know what you mean...I hate people who are all tied up on typos, grammar mistakes, etc. It's a work in progress so lay off the case, right? Haha. Anyway, it looks like you fixed the destruction and domination thing, lol. This sounds interesting :D

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konveezy19

6/9/2010 4:50 PM PDT

@ michelle4laughs, i can't change the overview for some reason it won't let me it always says something about feedback percentage and i can't change it. unless somebody knows how to and could tell me the way to do it. the overview will be stuck like that until the book is completed and about your comment from the first chapter.....i know the book needs to be proofread and some editing needs to be done and I have gotten that from allot of people up here, but what some people don't understand is that its a work in progress. The book isn't finished yet so its not gonna be flawless. Even published books have typo's and mispelled words in them. Just wanted to let you know that

Michelle4Laughs

6/9/2010 12:58 PM PDT

Knowing only that the Federation is on the brink of total domination and destruction(comma) they are > This sounds like the Federation is going to both dominate and be destroyed. They can't do both. Did you mean total domination and destruction of their enemy?

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