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Project Leader:
MSOlney
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The WEbook community
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Category:
Fiction
Genre:
Sci Fi/Fantasy
Military/Espionage
Language:
English

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Terran Defenders:Genesis

In 2012 Humanity's greatest question will be answered. We are not alone... http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/terran-defendersgenesis/6026929?productTrackingContext=center_search_results

The year is 2012 and as the eve of the ancient Mayan prophecy comes to pass Earth is contacted by a mysterious alien race. What's stranger is that there is not one but two alien vessels speeding towards the Earth. Can the message for aid be trusted? In this adventure nothing is what it seems, just who can we trust?

Follow Moses Jameson and his team of soldiers and diplomats as they try to unravel the ancient mysteries raised by the alien arrival. A mystery that has the potential of endangeri ... more »

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Itarielle96

3/16/2010 2:47 PM PDT

oooooh.... i like how you twisted the whole apocalypse thing in 2012 to aliens might invade earth, and THAT is what will end the universe. (although i don't believe in the Mayan "prophecy", this sounds really good!!)

j_oliveira

3/4/2010 6:15 AM PST

Just started to read everything and I have to say , I loved it !!!

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black_flame

10/21/2009 8:37 PM PDT

Wow sounds interesting ^_^

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DNVong

10/21/2009 8:00 PM PDT

Sorry I can. I have to much to get done. Keep writing though.

Hyperbole

10/21/2009 3:34 PM PDT

Thanks for the invitation, but I have a little too much on my plate. I started reading the prologue, though, and I think (as far as I read) that your novel looks interesting - not right up my alley, but interesting. One thing I noticed though is that you use really vague phrasing in the beginning, you may want to make your sentences more precise. Wordy books tend to get tedious.

MSOlney

10/10/2009 2:55 AM PDT

Currently in the process of a total edit, some things will most likely be changed and any spelling errors (which I know there are) will be ironed out. I will most likely add whole new sections at some point to help flesh out some aspects of the plot. Oh and the link below is now defunct. Happy reading and I hope you enjoy what is up on here, any feedback would be great. Cheers

MSOlney

8/30/2009 4:07 PM PDT

On sale now at http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/terran-defenders-genesis/7598651

the_master

8/12/2009 6:25 AM PDT

inspire me ......

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the_master

8/12/2009 6:24 AM PDT

inspire me ................

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jjbellinski

7/16/2009 8:52 AM PDT

Hi Matt,

Thanks for the invitation. I won't be able to get to reading it right away since I'm struggling to finish my own novel. It looks good though, and I wish you well with it. I'll try to read it later.

~jj

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omanh

7/15/2009 2:04 PM PDT

Thanks for the invitation. I am not taking on any new projects with regard to reading and leaving feedback right now. At least not in the category of novels. I just don't have the time to give them a worthwhile read and decent feeback. Thanks for the invitation.
Omanh

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Shankifer

7/9/2009 11:14 AM PDT

sorry about that

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Shankifer

7/9/2009 11:13 AM PDT

sounds good so far, I'll be reading on. I love the opening statement. Although i will suggest you make it Humanity's greatest question since you're stating ownership. So far that's all, I'll be sure to leave little comments along the way.
Keep up the good work.
-Mike

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Shankifer

7/9/2009 12:55 AM PDT

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EvaLynn

7/4/2009 11:23 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite, but I really am not able to devote any time to it. Not writing, just taking care of the farm and my mom, she's 96 and requires a lot of attention. I do enjoy reading your work, though, it's different and always exciting. Keep it up.

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