"President of her Imagine Nation" ... "tooth hurty"... "her tissues danced since it had boogie in it."  hahaha... great stuff... thumbs up!

love it. publish. please check out my combined children's poem book in the children's section of the vote

Loved it. Publish this story STAT.

Adorable and entertaining. Loved the message!

Imagination is the key to creative thinking.  Creative thinking is the key to writing and creative experiences.  This author has given me the key to a happy smile!  Where can I buy this book?

Ingenious! Love Lucy & the Tooth Fairy. Written with wisdom teeth!

Its beautiful story finshed developing book I like it mike

another breathtaking masterpiece by this author!

great read

If your down in the blues, forget the doctor, just read Blue Tooth Fairy!

I wish I was a kid again so I could look forward to losing a tooth and getting a visit from the tooth fairy!

What a cute tale!

What a cute tale?

i wish you success.

Jt cant wait to read it!

Wonderful little story.  Great to share with all the youngsters.

I voted for you!!

I love this story!!!!!!!!! Its cool and adventurous!

Great Story!

This is an adorable story that explains so much to kids readers!

very nice story

Well written and well said...this is a very good book ..I hope you will return the vote...Good luch!!! You got my vote!

You are a very good writer I love your style.  I voted for you please vote for me to.

Jayne...Your fan base says it all...
Hope you'll share some of this well-deserved
glory -- by continuing to...

WRITE ON...!

yes.  A lovely story - and so right for the age group although I agree with flossy that there is something for the adults in there too!

Well written ; Both adults and kids will enjoy this. You get my vote

Hey! Cool book! I love stories like these! Thanks for posting it! :) Oh yeah, and could you please view my profile, i have no views :(

Very nice :):):):)!!

Every child and Adult can relate to this fantastic story!!!!

That is quite a nice little story.

Lovely story. You´ve got my vote. I like the sewing kit in the mouth. Please check out my "Haggis" story if you have time, it´s in the voting cycle too. :)

This tale has a lot to offer.  It's very creative.

Good luck :)

I liked how Lucy thought of all the things that happen with the tooth fairy.  I thought it was a great idea to do something on the toothfairy. I liked how you siad tooth hurty and i loved how it was wisdom teeth and how the tooth was found in the waffles. You used great words. it was an Awesome story aunt Jayne

I just finished reading your other two and perhaps their rythmn made it harder for me to read this one than if I had read this one first; but I can't help but wonder if this would be even better in the poetic format of the other two??
I agree with the comment that states some of the play on word and their explainations felt forced. Your other two set a high standard...but I am sure you can get this one there!

Great story and very cute.   I would cut out a few of the questions in the beginning, a little too many.  To make the story even better and tighten it up.  It is so good and would be gorgeous with illustrations.  I don't think it is too short or too long. Perfect the way it is--great job!

Just a few typos and grammatical errors that I found to help you out:
mouth but Mom’s =mouth, but Mom
Apple and =apple and
besides she?=besides her?
first tooth but =first tooth, but
Tooth Fairy’s is spelled two different ways; Tooth Fairies',
also remember not to capitalize the word"The" before the Tooth Fairy.  Sometimes you did and sometimes you didn't.

“Have you lost your mind, young lady?” Lucy’s Mom shouted? =
“Have you lost your mind, young lady?” Lucy’s Mom shouted.
“Maybe tonight” Lucy shouted as she turned off the bathroom light and skipped to her bedroom. =“Maybe tonight,” Lucy shouted as she turned off the bathroom light and skipped to her bedroom.
“Maybe tonight” Lucy’s Mom and Dad said =“Maybe tonight,” Lucy’s Mom and Dad said,
“Oh know” Lucy=“Oh no,” Lucy

It was more like a “my tooth is gone” shriek. Lucy actually shrieked.  =It was more like a “my tooth is gone.” Lucy actually shrieked. 
Mom and Dad =mom and dad==should not be capitalized throughout unless the first word in the sentence.

pillow” her =pillow,” her
tooth but it =tooth, but it
responded “we=responded, “we
“Syrup,” Lucy

tooth but =tooth, but  (check there are a few of these)
“Syrup” Lucy =“Syrup,” Lucy
“No, just my tooth” Lucy =“No, just my tooth,” Lucy
“My tooth”=“My tooth,” (2 of these)
“Syrup” =“Syrup,”  (2 of these)
“No, just my tooth” Lucy =“No, just my tooth,” Lucy

It was soaked in sticky syrup but =It was soaked in sticky syrup, but

“Quick” said The Blue Tooth Fairy=“Quick,” said the Blue Tooth Fairy

on the foot =at the foot

too long

The idea is adorable, but I felt some of it was a bit forced. Especially all of the play on words that the author felt needed explaining.
Also, I think it either needs to be a bit longer or a bit shorter to fit a target audience. As it is now, you are kind of in the middle of two age groups.

I totally loved the ending!
"And Lucy smiled a toothy grin, minus one!" it sticks in my mind...

it's a good story but I think it's a little complex for your target age group

Its very good.  I am writing a novel,  but the next will be children's book,  actually short-stories.  I enjoyed reading yours.

love the idea

Clever use of words and common phrases and expressions.

Awesome!! :)

I think children will enjoy this story.

I love the president of my imagination!

The play are words are a bit stronger than the overall story.  Still, it's fun and enjoyable.

I like to see this LONGER!

The authors play on words is genius.

Clever use of language.  But, recycled teeth?

My kids were intrigued.

This author is quite clever and funny.

This story was filled with both, wit and wisdom. I loved how creative and sincere this story played out. I can seriously see this story as a short animated film. This one wins an award in my book. That's the whole tooth and nothing but the tooth! :)

Very Imaginitive! Jayne is President of the Imagine Nation.  Loved the ending!

silly and funny story

believing is everything!!!

Nice story -- but I tend to agree with Bobby, it would be nice for the tooth fairy to come up with a more imaginative use for baby teeth. 

Couple of typos:

but Mom’s know everything. -- just plural "moms" not possessive

“Oh know” Lucy screamed -- should be "Oh, no!"

Lucy’s Mom shouted? -- no "?"

Who is this author and why hasn't she been published before. Very imaginitive and creative. An inspiration to all who wish to write and follow their dreams. I loved it.

Cute.  The beginning is beautiful, but the middle section feels a bit forced.  I was hoping the tooth fairy would do something beside recycle old teeth like Lucy had imagined.  But fun overall.

where can i sign up to buy the hardback version??

Very cute.... I enjoyed this story.

What a riot. Blue Tooth Fairy  is the funniest "tooth fairy" story I have ever read. My children loved the humor and suspense. A new way to look at losing teeth! Way to Go!

I want to be a kid again!  Another great read.