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Tell the Truth
My three poetry submissions.
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1/15/2012 5:54 PM PST
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1/15/2012 5:35 PM PST
8/31/2009 9:27 AM PDT
great work! I vote publish.
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8/31/2009 8:14 AM PDT
My favourite was refresh, please publish, love Wennie xxxhugs
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8/30/2009 7:04 AM PDT
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8/29/2009 9:56 AM PDT
Refresh is lovely
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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8/27/2009 2:52 PM PDT
The last stanza in Goodbyes is quite good. I think the opening was decent too, but it lost some of the flow and emotion when you started to explain what happened in the relationship.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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8/24/2009 6:48 AM PDT
All three are good and unique. Publish!
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
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8/21/2009 6:48 AM PDT
A yes vote
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8/7/2009 7:46 AM PDT
very interesting style of writing, i enjoyed, good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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8/7/2009 4:22 AM PDT
great writing, and interesting.
YES!!! to the vote.
good luck.
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
YES!!! to the vote.
good luck.
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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8/2/2009 1:57 PM PDT
General:
This writer is the definition of
a webook poet calm cool and not
afraid to sho emotions on the page
so my votoe is yes
BASICLY PUBLISH THIS
Form:
great form
Content:
stream emotion i like it i want more than just these 3
Imagery:
im still wondering how
this is imagery is not
accompanied
by a photo
Tone:
im not goin say only the poet ccan
Musicality:
soul
This writer is the definition of
a webook poet calm cool and not
afraid to sho emotions on the page
so my votoe is yes
BASICLY PUBLISH THIS
Form:
great form
Content:
stream emotion i like it i want more than just these 3
Imagery:
im still wondering how
this is imagery is not
accompanied
by a photo
Tone:
im not goin say only the poet ccan
Musicality:
soul
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8/2/2009 5:35 AM PDT
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8/1/2009 10:52 PM PDT
General:
The message is strong and to the point.
Form:
good form
Content:
Find the content to be adult level so it may not show up in a middle school reader.
Imagery:
good imagery
Tone:
Tone is a bit hard.
The message is strong and to the point.
Form:
good form
Content:
Find the content to be adult level so it may not show up in a middle school reader.
Imagery:
good imagery
Tone:
Tone is a bit hard.
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8/1/2009 9:54 AM PDT
Thank you!!
8/1/2009 7:46 AM PDT
"refresh" is my favorite because it establishes a mood in very few words. The others were strong expressions of self, but the originality of this one makes it stand out.
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8/1/2009 3:19 AM PDT
This writer deserves the vote
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