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Children's Books
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So you all know. In reality my son is 4. In the stories I kind of see him as around 9 or 10. That is why his vocubulary is a larger and his thought process is more indepth.
It's a really cute story with a great plot but I feel like the ending needs to be developed a little more. It's hard to understand that a small child would all of a sudden know how to destroy the evil vacuum cleaner based on his judgement that an evil scientist was angry about his schooling. Just a thought.....
this is a great pirate story, with well rounded characters and wonderful interesting plot.
Love these stories:) I'm positive they will be published one way or the other:) Great Job Ken and Best of luck!
Excellent! Charming! I also thought of Calvin and Hobbes, and Winnie the Pooh, but these adventures seemed fresh and exciting.
I especially loved the battle with the vacuum cleaner -- I think that it's that innate distrust that prevents men from offering to vacuum their homes when they get older. ;-D
I especially loved the battle with the vacuum cleaner -- I think that it's that innate distrust that prevents men from offering to vacuum their homes when they get older. ;-D
I like the idea, but I think it's not quite ready yet. I keep thinking of Calvin and Hobbes and Winnie the Pooh. It needs to separate itself from those. I'm also unsure of who the audience will be. All that said, there is a load of potential here and the way you tell the story makes it adventurous and fun.
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