Book Info
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Project Leader:
Kenneth
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
Short Story
Children's -
Language:
English
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The Adventures of Link and Purple
Link was a rambunctious child, always looking for adventure and excitement. Purple, was his best friend. He also happened to be a bear, a stuffed bear in fact. The two were inseparable and always on the go. These are the tails of their adventures.
I started writing these after coming home one day and my son who is 4 now told me how he and his teddy bear Purple fought an evil robot. It turned out that the evil robot was the vaccum cleaner. I was so inspired that night that I started the first st ... more »
I started writing these after coming home one day and my son who is 4 now told me how he and his teddy bear Purple fought an evil robot. It turned out that the evil robot was the vaccum cleaner. I was so inspired that night that I started the first st ... more »
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So you all know. In reality my son is 4. In the stories I kind of see him as around 9 or 10. That is why his vocubulary is a larger and his thought process is more indepth.
It's a really cute story with a great plot but I feel like the ending needs to be developed a little more. It's hard to understand that a small child would all of a sudden know how to destroy the evil vacuum cleaner based on his judgement that an evil scientist was angry about his schooling. Just a thought.....
this is a great pirate story, with well rounded characters and wonderful interesting plot.
Love these stories:) I'm positive they will be published one way or the other:) Great Job Ken and Best of luck!
Excellent! Charming! I also thought of Calvin and Hobbes, and Winnie the Pooh, but these adventures seemed fresh and exciting.
I especially loved the battle with the vacuum cleaner -- I think that it's that innate distrust that prevents men from offering to vacuum their homes when they get older. ;-D
I especially loved the battle with the vacuum cleaner -- I think that it's that innate distrust that prevents men from offering to vacuum their homes when they get older. ;-D
I like the idea, but I think it's not quite ready yet. I keep thinking of Calvin and Hobbes and Winnie the Pooh. It needs to separate itself from those. I'm also unsure of who the audience will be. All that said, there is a load of potential here and the way you tell the story makes it adventurous and fun.
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