To be honest, if this is it, I wouldn't publish it, I'm not saying that It is bad, in fact they are all amazing, but you won't stand much chance with so little here. More stories, then you might have more of a chance, like I say to these kind of projects, You deffinately have a good start to a project, you work on length, it will be fine. Also please remember, every project, no matter how long or short - has huge potential, some peopl just have the bare bones of a masterpiece.

A person on WEbook once told me, When he writes stories, novels or anything with a running line - he first, puts pen to paper, planning out each individual character, looks, personality, background, age, relationships EVERYTHING!
He even writes down things like what nick names are given to the characters by freinds or family etc.

So in answer to your question should I publish this, I think not yet - deffinately in the future, if you keep writing like this I will vote for it and buy the book!

So I hope I have cleared up  that question for you - it really is good work and keep writing this project because it is great!

~Ben

I will soon have more free time on my hands, but for the next week I will be in the middle of a lot of research, I will contribute to the best of my ability.

but i wish i could write a story..... =(

OMG im in!!! im in!!! im in!!!! XD