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The Blue Hallway Project
The Blue Hallway Project is a compilation of my dreams, a look into the human psyche. No plot, no characters, only a progression from childhood. Many don't really make sense, but those are dreams. I will leave out nothing. All details, no matter how strange, will be committed to paper. Lucid dreams, funny dreams, sad dreams...now that I've started making a journal, I will catalog them using dates.
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I think this would be a great book/journal. I think you may want to write down the things that you thought about the most in your week, because I find that those leak into my dreams quite often. Is there any specific reason for the title? Just wondering.
I'm 12 and this is my first comment here.
-Spencer
I'm 12 and this is my first comment here.
-Spencer
Seems more interesting to you since it is a (subconsciousness) journal, But don't let me be a rock in your river. If it is truly a book YOU would pick up and read, than write it. If you would never read about another person's dreams, than do not complete with book.
Unless there was a meaning to it, so it was allegorical fiction in some way YOU were aware of, whether it be obvious or not, or you stated the meanings of these dreams, I find the idea to be candy. Write books to evoke thought and feelings and both. If your book does not evoke either, than it is along the lines of a poor sitcom.
This might seem harsh, but like I said, I am but a mere rock in your river. What I have said can only be truth, or false. That is up for you to decide.
Unless there was a meaning to it, so it was allegorical fiction in some way YOU were aware of, whether it be obvious or not, or you stated the meanings of these dreams, I find the idea to be candy. Write books to evoke thought and feelings and both. If your book does not evoke either, than it is along the lines of a poor sitcom.
This might seem harsh, but like I said, I am but a mere rock in your river. What I have said can only be truth, or false. That is up for you to decide.
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i really love this idea, and want to read what you have so far (just no time right now) but i'm a bit skeptical. if you're just putting your dreams into words, what exactly is the point? are you telling a story, or collecting data? i think the idea of telling a story, even your story, through dreams is a fantastic idea if pulled off. but a list of dreams isn't really a good story. sounds like markson.
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This is a really interesting idea. I love analyzing dreams for what they might mean in real life.
I feel like it might lack some continuity though? Maybe some commentary on what is going on in your life would be helpful to the reader. Either that, or you might considering embellishing some of your dreams with details that might make everything flow. Things that would make the symbolism really transparent to the reader.
Or you could just keep it as strictly dreams. Maybe it would work. Idkkk. Good idea though.
I feel like it might lack some continuity though? Maybe some commentary on what is going on in your life would be helpful to the reader. Either that, or you might considering embellishing some of your dreams with details that might make everything flow. Things that would make the symbolism really transparent to the reader.
Or you could just keep it as strictly dreams. Maybe it would work. Idkkk. Good idea though.
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I love how you wrote your story with expression. Could you teach me how to do it?
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What about the addition of an interactive dream interpretation section?
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I do think the concept sounds good. Sounds unique and intriguing to see the pattern of your psyche.
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