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The Dark Unknown
Evelyn Carr's life was picture perfect, she had awsome friends, loving parents, and the hottest guy in school (Harrison Ash) was actually talking to her! Then she turned 18...a horrble secret was revealed, and because of it she was turned into the one thing she never believed existed. A vampire.
She is swept away to the magical city of Carpathia, or the kingdom of the vampires. When she learns what the secret that "killed" is, and what her so called allies are really planning to do to her, she ... more »
She is swept away to the magical city of Carpathia, or the kingdom of the vampires. When she learns what the secret that "killed" is, and what her so called allies are really planning to do to her, she ... more »
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this is like my story except that my char. has to kill vampires pretending to be a human in a military and kill humans..
this will be good, don't give up =P
this will be good, don't give up =P
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This isnt anything like twilight and whoever says so is a idiot!
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this is so similar to my story (moon of perfection) that it's quite scary 0.o
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ok, I have only one suggestion to make your peice better. dont reviel so much of the story in your beinning. That ruins the story. Now everyone knows that one of two things is going to happen with the "So-called-friends" they either turn out to be true friends or to be the bad guys. and I would change killed or bold it or something because just like that it seems out of place. Other than that it does sound kinda interesting.
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wow you should really poblish rthe book. its really good.
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sounds awesome and nothing like twilight. and i understand that b.s.
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