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Vampsaccabis
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Category:
Fiction
Genre:
Teen
Mystery
Language:
English

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The Dark Unknown

The story about a girl who gets turned into a vampire, and must escape from her new so-called-friends before they kill her.(IS SO NOT ANOTHER *TWILIGHT* STORY!!!!!)

Evelyn Carr's life was picture perfect, she had awsome friends, loving parents, and the hottest guy in school (Harrison Ash) was actually talking to her! Then she turned 18...a horrble secret was revealed, and because of it she was turned into the one thing she never believed existed. A vampire.
She is swept away to the magical city of Carpathia, or the kingdom of the vampires. When she learns what the secret that "killed" is, and what her so called allies are really planning to do to her, she ... more »

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Kitty_Kimi

11/2/2009 1:20 AM PST

This is totally AWESOME!!!

Keep typing!

And I'm so reading this ASAP!!!

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nonamebear

10/23/2009 7:10 PM PDT

whoa... BOOKMARK!

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Airigami

8/10/2009 1:42 AM PDT

this is like my story except that my char. has to kill vampires pretending to be a human in a military and kill humans..

this will be good, don't give up =P

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Goldenlips

8/4/2009 8:34 PM PDT

I'm going to read this a asap I promise!

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NanaTremain

7/27/2009 7:27 AM PDT

This isnt anything like twilight and whoever says so is a idiot!

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JamesWGuijarro

7/22/2009 7:22 PM PDT

right on! I like it and the pic is badass too!

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envirogirl25

7/7/2009 7:57 PM PDT

looks good

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Miz_YouNeek

7/4/2009 2:02 PM PDT

this is so similar to my story (moon of perfection) that it's quite scary 0.o

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SleeplessWriter

7/4/2009 6:27 AM PDT

ok, I have only one suggestion to make your peice better. dont reviel so much of the story in your beinning. That ruins the story. Now everyone knows that one of two things is going to happen with the "So-called-friends" they either turn out to be true friends or to be the bad guys. and I would change killed or bold it or something because just like that it seems out of place. Other than that it does sound kinda interesting.

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horse55lover

6/15/2009 12:16 PM PDT

wow you should really poblish rthe book. its really good.

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