Your story journal reminds me of the MTV series 16 and Pregnant. Please take this statement as a compiliment. I can feel through Veronica's diary entries her anxiety of the vast array of emotions she is going through, the decisions the character has to make without knowing what the future holds. I feel like I'm reading about a real life person. How does Veronica feel/fear about her impending labour especially after what happened to Piper? I love your story and how you've approached it, I look forward to reading more and I'm itching to know what Veronica's final decision will be.

I really feel everything. This is one hell of a great story. I seem to connect. I love this. I'm going to read about this more.

this is a GREAT story. I am REALLY loving it :) I would like it better if it was a better journal, it is a good idea but it is almost like you are making the journal and then you kind of get sidetracked and its more book-ish type and then it is back to the journal. I would have done it a regular book with journal entry's within it but it is still VERY good and I would LOVE to read the end of it.

Great Story!
Can't wait to finish it!

i love this story. it's so good

This is so good it makes me cry and laugh in all the right parts!

This is an unbelievably good story. I think you have a lot of potential, and I think you should keep writing. Maybe we could swap ideas? I think I may have some good tricks up my sleeves. :)

great stuff  sad and real

this is great! i'm loving it.. please write more!

Wow, I read through this and there were times I wanted to cry/teared up a bit. I'm not sure if there's a book like this already out there, but this is really great!

The introduction seems very realistic and meaningful. I like it. It sounds interesting. I always like reading about social, current takings happening. Like teen pregnancies (spell check.haha.) or gay people or things like that. So I will be sure to like this story.

xoxo

That...was cool.
I'm officially waiting for the next installment. Dovotedly waiting, may I add.

Update soon plzz!

interesting

Hi there.

First, I love the title, its really unique.  Second, I really enjoy the format, the journal is a great idea.  I can't wait to read more.

I like the title.

wow love the title and it sounds really good

Wow...no. Awsome... no. Good... no. Great... no. Man I can't think of a good enough word to describe!!

i really like this story! i love it! it's so real and i just wanna cry when i read how sad some of the situations she's in are. keep writting this is something great!

this is a good book!!!

nice

my type

This storyline sounds really interesting. Just a suggestion: I would be inclined to use your blurb ("I wouldn't be at Hansen Prep...) as your prologue rather than where it is now. Previous description (in bold) is intriguing enough.

cool

sounds good