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The Elemental Chronicles - Book 1 - Find The Light
In the first book of the elemental chronicles we learn that the fifth generation of elementals are to be born because there is a great evil coming to destroy both the human world as well as well as the underworld. The main character of this book is Aliena Rosalind, one of the first to be born out of the five elementals. She has control over the element of fire. Go along with her as she embarks on a journey to find herself (more than once) and learns about the different races that exist in the un
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Hey i posted part of chapter one but i didn't put up the prologue yet. I'm kind of still working on that (I know I'm working backwards) but please let me know what you think of chapter 1 so far. Thanks. :-)
I've been working on the first two chapters so hopefully i can get them up here soon and i'll make all the changes you guys suggested for my description Thanks again for all your help.
i love the idea of elements and that kind of magic. i shall be interested to read your story
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This sounds really interesting I'd like to continue reading this.
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Sorry guys for making you wait so long for my story i promise i'll have something up soon its just school has been killing me and i've been trying to do my research and writing chapters in between my school work but i promise that i will hopefully have something up here soon thanks for being so patient. :-)
remove "The main character of this book" & make it flow smoothly.. & its sounds realaaaalllly interesting!! good work
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I like this a lot, the only thing I suggest is never say "this book" or "my story" it kind of ruins to flow. I like the idea though. Is this going to be in first or third person?
If it's first make the intro in first, otherwise it's absolutely perfect.
:) Aniytlia
If it's first make the intro in first, otherwise it's absolutely perfect.
:) Aniytlia
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I think the decription's great! I like her name -it's very unique.
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if this sounds like it might be good but needs a better description please let me know because i am trying to make it sound really good
I'm currently working on the summary so give me about 2 weeks and i'll have it up for you to read. i really want this to be captivating so just give me some time to get it up here and thank again to all those who offered to help me out. I'm really going to need it. :-)
I'll be happy to help. Would be nice to get a summery though.
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Thanks I think I'm going to need it. right now i'm doing some research for the book or really books because i plan on writing five for the series. I put this up so I could get the title of my book out of the way. I'm hoping that it will be a great success so if feel the need to correct me on something or see something that could be done better I would really appreciate the help. Thanks again.
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