Hey thanks but the edward and bella couple never split up they stay true to each other and you will see that once you continue on into the story

Plot:
I thing its rather cool idea, but even though as much as I would like to see this book in Shops you would definitly find it hard to publish it, but if it is just for fun you are doing a very good job of writing and idea. Another thought is that the story is a little un-releastic because of the story line, its good and interesting but its not really truthful to Stephenie Meyer's story. But coninue it for fun, others will definitly enjoy it especially Twilight fans and hey maybe Stephenie Meyer might read it someday and decide to ask your permission to use it as her next story so keep going!
Gd Luck
El's

I actually think that'd be kinda cool. That's what I did in my fan fiction. That's why I put a warning comment below that said, "if you are completely attached to the Bella+Edward  couple, then don't read this."

don't worry i went threw my story and relized something i had forgotten so if you have already read the first chapter then read it again and you'll see a new character

Ooh, nice. :D Just please dont make edward or any of the other cullens fall in love with rosanna, thatd be wrong. Make a new cullen guy or something. Thanks. :D

Letting you all know I do not own any rights to the characters of the story except for my created characters.