Publish.

Good Luck your Poetry is always beautiful to read, you give so much of your self....love Wennie xxxhugs

Stan-you know I love your work-I wish you the very best of luck and pray you get these published!

Good luck Stan wonderful work :)

General:
i am much impressed.

best similie:

"Oh to be the moon, to compel those lips

Like lighthouse to ship, her radiance so attracts"



Content:
finally a love poem (immortality)  that has some depth to it!

Imagery:
could use a few more images, but the ones you do select are clever and not cliche.

good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

Very nice!

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

These were really, and I mean really splendid. My favorite was My Hero and than My Immortality. Of course I still liked Such a sweet Fantasy. You have a talent worth sharing with the world. So you have a yes vote my friend.

~A.J

You most definitely have my vote. All the best,
                                                                          Crys

beautiful! 

my only suggestions would be for lines 15, 16 it  would perhaps be an improvement if you said her legs were formed perfectly lose 'so' and then lose 'as if' in line 16. 

then, im not sure you need the last stanza at all, and if you do, it seems a bit unfinished.

wonderful poem you have here a nice piece of work!

Top notch as always.my vote went your way

I love your work...you are brilliant as always!!!

i could not even read your poems and still hit the publish button. lol. but i did and they were amazing as usual. obviously you have my vote. :)

poetically we have allot in common noticing that is kind of scary
you get the whole mirror effect almost we're both versatile as well though

The choices selected here are perfect. You have a wonderful use of words while capturing odd senses and hidden feelings of love and anger. I wonder sometimes while reading your work what you were thinking or what might have happened to create such works of art.... I shall be very disappointed if I don't see this published. You have my vote! Thanks for the read.

We all need to have a hero standing behind us, whispering to our soul . . .

You can be all that you dream.

Write on!

General:
These poems are genius. I think you have great potential. Definetly should be published.

Form:
The form was nicely-done.

Content:
The content was captivating.

Imagery:
Also aewsome.

Musicality:
Great!

-Cyrennedy

you should so publish : )

Got mine.
Please check out mine too;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun

your poems should be publish. My vote is yours.

I almost missed you. I could have sworn I had already voted, but I must be wrong cause I gave you my vote to publish! I know I visited this page before, must've been before the vote. Anyway I know you have seen my entry, but I may have changed the selections before the vote was actually open. heres the link:

http://www.webook.com/poetry.aspx?p=ac366f04cc1f4161a8d81d0459a3ca18&sit=0f90dedfc2464186a7dff3c3999f86dd

Check it out. I hope you like it.

General:
I had to read this one "My Hero" several times to make sure you were not discribing my wife.  You seemed to know her quite well, it never occured to me before that their just might be two such angels walking the earth at the same time.
If this is just your gir friend, you better grab her and marry her. 

Form:
This accomplished author uses free verse like michael Angelo used the paint brush and chisels to creat his masterpieces.

He structures his pieces as a true wordsmith building and shaping each nuance with care and dilligence just like an old time craftsman making a samuria's Katana sword the weapon with a soul.   Created with love and years of time and patience honeing the neccessary skills for it's perfection.

Content:
This prose is about an unidentified lady, who is the focus of his hearts desire.  The emotional attachment and bond he has with her and it's importance to him in retrospect.

Imagery:
As with all of Stan's work there is a very vivid clearly defined coorful at times sharp imagery to the reader who is open to the romantic feelings and raw emotion that is his hallmark.

Tone:
Slow but very light and positive and bright, no darkness or dispair it is very upbeat and hopeful.

Musicality:
This one is easy..  "You are the wind beneath my wings"

Very good job Stan, I thought I had already voted, but on checking I haden't yet found it.

Thanks for the link, heres mine if your interested:

 http://www.webook.com/project/my-entry-for-the-poetry-vote

i have read your other poems and this is another good attention-grabber. you had my vote.

I think my favorite is "My immortality" I really like the beginning and how it immediately drew my attention ;D

 a vote for you! :D

all 3 are pretty good. my vote is in.

I vote publish. You have talent.
Good Luck

Love,
 Ana

love them!

Voted publish , best of luck and hope you find time to view mine before votes done, thanks Dante

brilliant :)
Amber :)

youve got my vote hope u return the favor on mines

Here's my vote

You've got my vote!

Nice work. Publish. If you want to check out my three, look for Destini's Trifecta and vote if you're so inspired. Good luck!

Thrugh all of your poems the strong feeling is present, but what i enjoyed most was the individual pictures you painted in each one. So clear with alot of description, its brillaint.

I really enjoyed My Immortality, its was truly amazing.
I love oyu style of writng.
Great grammar and spelling.
Such strong emotions, its a yes from me.
:)

absolutely... not sure why it took so long for you to pop up
PUBLISH!!!! great writing here.


if you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

Awsome I voted :)

I voted

I have read  and voted Good Luck !




http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you get time have a read.

Gee, Stan... sorry it took me so long to vote....I thought I already had put my vote in for you!!!!!  Great work, I wish you the best of luck, you deserve publication!

I already told you I loved "My Immortality" when it was a project and i will say it again...I love it!  And your other two speak as a bursting heart!  I much enjoyed the reads!

Very passionate poems - a yes vote.

What can I say? Publish!

publish

Good choices, good luck Stan...;-)

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

Shah. X

thumbs up, three from one of webook' s best

Great poems! You are very talented, and good luck in the contest,,,

I love the first one.  That one sounds like it can be made into something grand....

This was hauntingly beautiful. You should definitely be proud, but wail until after college to publish. Fame can be distracting.

Stan you have a talent. Voted

Wow, your poems are very powerful and compelling.
You got my vote!

Form:
Stan's poems are all good and My Immortality stands out as a favourite

great passsion talent my friend i hope you get puiblished you write with much heart sorry about computer mike

terrific work

Moving pieces...!

Publish

Publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

You write with power and meaning -- worthy stuff.

stan without yours in the collection where would a webook collection of poetry be?

Well done my friend! If you don't win the poetry vote, then there is something wrong with this site, LOL! Good luck amigo!

good work I liked it stan. Hope you do well in the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication

Great pieces, you got my  vote
Return the favor plz.

beautiful stan!

One of the best poets on webook, lives up to his namesake another poet by the name of cohen.

you assuredly have my vote. you are a true artist, and a prolific writer. proliferation is a gift.

Good luck mate.Good luck.

Stan

good luck with the vote and keep up the excellent writing.