The Wild One

Book Info

Project Leader:

Zara

Participants:
The WEbook community

Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only

Format:
Continuous/Novel

Type:
Fiction

Genre:
Romance

Language:
English

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Sometimes the one you strive to hate is usually the one you truly desire.

Lady Leana and Lord Davidson make every effort to hate each other but when dire situations put these two together, their passion and desire for each other quickly prevails.
Even with danger surrounding them, Leana can’t seem to resist the one man she can't stand. And Dwayne, Lord Davidsons, starts to experience emotions he never knew he had.
Will their own pride keep them away from each other? Or will one of them dismiss his/her pride and succumb to what the heart truly wants?

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Zara

8/17/2008 05:09 PM PT

Thanks, I used your ideas :)

concerned

8/17/2008 12:06 PM PT

Instead of "unravels", how about "prevails"?
Instead of 'danger lurking around", how about "danger surrounding them" or "danger on all sides"?
Instead of "to gain emotions", how about "experience emotions"?

YThe word "scum" is unusual, how avout "succumb"?

Zara

8/15/2008 06:54 PM PT

Would anyone mind taking a look at my work and comment on whatever changes you think I should make.

Thank you, Zara