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The World from the View of a Poet
Originally, this started out as a collection of poems about nature. But, gradually, I started to branch off onto other topics, and put them here anyway. This collection represents me, because all of these poems were written on the spur of the moment, reflecting on something I saw, something I felt, something I did. Please enjoy and feedback!
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9/24/2010 2:59 PM PDT
OMG I LOVE the project cover. lol its AMAZING :)
11/10/2009 12:42 PM PST
oh you're flicker? thanks! :D im glad you joined. thanks for the support about the contest. please check out Shell (unless you already have ;) ) and i'll check out your project when i can!
10/22/2009 4:45 PM PDT
Your poems are so gooood! I've read Water, The Blizzard, Night Storm and Faces so far. Night Storm is definately one of my favorites! Thanks for helping me (Flicker) find this site btw, it's great! Sorry you didn't win the contest I definately think you should have :(
www.webook.com/project/The-Waste-1
www.webook.com/project/The-Waste-1
10/14/2009 2:37 PM PDT
yay! i have 10 poems now!
9/26/2009 2:03 PM PDT
thanks all for voting. sadly, none of my poems made it in :( but if they ever have another one of these, dont think i wont try again! :)
8/29/2009 1:47 PM PDT
Imagery:
you piant great iamge with words I love your heart
good luck god bless mike
you piant great iamge with words I love your heart
good luck god bless mike
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8/29/2009 1:42 PM PDT
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8/28/2009 4:01 PM PDT
Loved them all, you have a knack for description...wonderful poems.
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8/27/2009 10:22 PM PDT
Voted publish, good luck! Great poems !
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8/26/2009 4:44 PM PDT
Your collection has a very strong theme, and I can tell that it wasn't pieced together randomly, which I like.
My two favorite lines:
"Rain pounds on the roof,
Chanting a funeral dirge"
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
My two favorite lines:
"Rain pounds on the roof,
Chanting a funeral dirge"
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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8/25/2009 8:39 AM PDT
I vote publish.
8/22/2009 6:23 AM PDT
8/11/2009 3:46 AM PDT
I liked all three but the one about the Night Storm gripped me as I have fear of thunder and I could visualise myself in bed with my pillow.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have time.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have time.
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8/9/2009 6:58 PM PDT
Great views. I love your work. You have a yes from me.
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
8/9/2009 6:40 PM PDT
ok, i like all of them, they all rock, and i don't know why my vote doesn't show up even though i voted
8/9/2009 6:37 PM PDT
again, wow, blizzard is nice too, but water is still my favorite!
8/9/2009 6:36 PM PDT
wow... im speechless. well, no... not really, water is an amazing poem, but there are 2 more for me to read!
8/8/2009 7:40 AM PDT
amazing! i love poetry!
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8/7/2009 11:11 AM PDT
thanks! actually, its gemini! :) but i love writing poems about nature.
8/7/2009 5:18 AM PDT
General:
You certianly could not have chosen a better title!
Content:
My favourite is Water, because of the last two lines- poetic and beautiful and true.
Night Storm makes me think of a child hiding from a ghost or an imaginary scary creature, but really there's nothing there and it's just the storm and all it tricks.
Imagery:
There is pleanty of this!
If you'd like to view my work you can at: http://www.webook.com/project/Jens-three-best-poems-on-mystical-freedom
All the best!
You certianly could not have chosen a better title!
Content:
My favourite is Water, because of the last two lines- poetic and beautiful and true.
Night Storm makes me think of a child hiding from a ghost or an imaginary scary creature, but really there's nothing there and it's just the storm and all it tricks.
Imagery:
There is pleanty of this!
If you'd like to view my work you can at: http://www.webook.com/project/Jens-three-best-poems-on-mystical-freedom
All the best!
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8/6/2009 12:44 PM PDT
Rain, snow, water . . . were you born under the sign of Cancer, per chance? ;-)
Nice imagery in your poems -- The Blizzard made me feel the cold sting of winter's weather.
Good Luck.
Nice imagery in your poems -- The Blizzard made me feel the cold sting of winter's weather.
Good Luck.
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8/5/2009 10:42 PM PDT
a yes vote from me!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
8/5/2009 5:24 PM PDT
beautifully written poetry! very brilliant! i hope it gets published!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
8/4/2009 10:07 PM PDT
8/4/2009 4:27 PM PDT
8/3/2009 1:31 PM PDT
I love these poems! they should definatly be published! Good luck, and you are the only 1 i am voting for!
8/3/2009 10:41 AM PDT
YES!
8/2/2009 2:33 PM PDT
yayyyyyy thanks mikemurphy and paige!
8/2/2009 7:07 AM PDT
I soooooooooooooooooo voted yes for you Sarah. These poems ROCK!!!!!!!!!!
8/2/2009 2:28 AM PDT
A yes vote.
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