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Please tell me how I can make these better. They are my favourite poems and I want to make them the best they can be so I might submit them. Tell me honestly what you think and any ideas you have to improve them. Thank you so much :)
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8/30/2009 7:15 AM PDT
8/30/2009 12:08 AM PDT
8/28/2009 4:23 PM PDT
I liked all three of these.. not MY style, but that's the entire reason for the vote.. to see all sorts of poetry come out. Loved the imagry, and detail in each. Emotions run through strongly and I hope your chances to et these published are as good as what I have read here.. Good luck.
8/28/2009 3:17 PM PDT
Your poetry spins a story. I could actually put all three together and would probably see the girl made from god, beautiful but broken hearted and lost in a sea of rememberance trying to stop the hurt of the broken heart. I voted yes. Good luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another
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Niyah Love
8/20/2009 2:26 PM PDT
Wonderfully said I love them all
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
8/14/2009 9:45 AM PDT
These are good poems. Well written and straight from the heart. A yes vote from me.
8/14/2009 8:06 AM PDT
Great poems, a yes vote
8/13/2009 4:09 AM PDT
very nice work, well done, good luck in the vote
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
8/9/2009 4:04 PM PDT
I ESPECIALLY LIKE MEMORIES, Voted yes
8/7/2009 9:55 AM PDT
8/5/2009 2:27 PM PDT
Simply lovely. You have my vote. Best of luck.
8/5/2009 12:51 PM PDT
very inspiring, very touching poetry. good luck! i hope you can get it published!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
8/2/2009 3:13 AM PDT
Beautiful poetry! - A yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.
Best wishes,
Mike.
8/1/2009 8:05 AM PDT
you have an innocence within your work that I find refreshing. great submissions. Good luck.
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