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Project Leader:
BaileyNB
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The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Poetry -
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General -
Language:
English
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The delicate existence of sunshine
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Congratulations, BaileyNB. Three very good poems that deserve to be published.
Good Luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have the time.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have the time.
I will have a look and write a proper review after the voting ends. I found "Postcards from America" by far the most original.
I liked all three and Postcards from America best and I gave you a thumbs up.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
The "Postcards" piece is definitely your strongest, primarily because it stays away from the overt pining-for-you banality in the others; that said, all three poems encapsulate an emotion with concrete imagery that is deftly employed. Well done; these are, in my worthless opinion, worthy of being published. Good luck.
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