That will deffinately offend people infact most people wont even bother to read the poems, and i am sure that who ever said your poems were "evil" must must be really stupid cause no one should say that kind of bull shit about any poems, so try not to let it get to you cause stupidity can be contagious, but you really need to change that introdution because every one has the right to say whether they like it or not and that introdution stops people from giving there opinion, but that of calling your poems evil is pure ignorance, and when some one gives you a bad comment ask them "why" so that you can improve your self

"This may offend others.
If you don't understand my poems please do not comment on this project.  I went through heartache, hatred, pain and love."  That is what I would write in the blurb spot.

Thanks for the invite and I will come from time to time to comment on your writings, but right now I can't accept anymore projects. Maybe later in the year.

Thumbs up! love Wennie xxxhugs

good luck

You might want to change your intro here so you don't make people think that your just being mean.  It is also written with very poor grammer.  Don't forget you get more flies with honey so don't scare off readers and voters by being or sounding rude.

Okay. This isn't long enough. Secondly, you make your emotions clear, but I dont know enough about the situation to be drawn in. I also feel like you ranted this out, and barely went back to edit - most pieces here repeat one another with very little variation to give me a broad and deep enough understanding of the themes.

I would suggest outlining what points you wish to hit, what details are relevant and necessary for the reader to know to understand everything there is to know on the topic, and then start your writing, rewriting, and getting feedback.

Most writing here is generic - it tells me the writer is in pain, but I learn barely anything else that would set it apart from the other thousand poems on WEbook with the same general themes. The shortness of the writing doesn't help either. I suggest you write a lot more, give far more details, and go more in depth. What happened to you that makes this different? Unique? Whay should I, as the reader, care? What should I learn? What should I walk away with? Should I just think about it, or do you want me to do something?

1. Were you serious about us pointing out the misspellings, or is that merely a part of your writing? Because if so, WEbook has a spellchecker, and it is your responsibility as the writer to use that tool before you submit for publication.
2. I will check everything before I vote, but it does not seem likely that this is at least 50k words, which would mean this is not long enough to be publshed under Webook's standards.

well done i like it

a truthful voice of youth
a vote for you
mel

Good poems, but the little synopsis thing at the top there will throw people off of it because of the atrocity of your grammer. Though, I have felt the same, many a time. THough my poems aren't as dark, the premise for inspiration are the same

i will like to read your work cause i write about pain,death and dark things in general.I was thinking about being part of your project.Is it ok? If it's not i'll just read your stuff.Thanks!

i like your poems theyre very interesting they remind me of how cruel the world is....which ive known how cruel it is most of my life....but very nice writing

A very moving collection though perhaps working on combining ideas and expanding to create a larger work.