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The WEbook community
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Project Leader Only (Closed)
Format:
Poetry
Poetry
Type:
Fiction
Fiction
Genre:
Literature
Literature
Language:
English
English
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I apologise to all who voted, but circumstances caused me to withdraw my submissions.
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My real identity? Um, my name is Juanita Ortega and I left my profile blank because I don't care to answer any of their questions. I'm not here to write, I'm here to read. I'm sorry you don't agree with my criticism, but it's valid. Those are some of the most cliche and horrible poems I have ever read, and I studied literature in College. You should perfect your art before you put it up for the vote. If you're on this site to receive nothing but glowing remarks, then you're in the wrong business. If it sucks, I'll tell you so, and you should be glad that someone was honest with you. Don't you dare harass me because I at least had the decency to put my real feelings on the site unlike some of these negatively voting assholes. Your work is bad, get better. If at some point I like your stuff, I'll say so, but for now, it's unreadable
Juanita
P.S. I don't appreciate you leaving comments about why you can't take criticism. It only makes you look bad anyway. If people like these poems it's probably because either they've got no experience with good poetry, or they write bad poetry themselves.
Juanita
P.S. I don't appreciate you leaving comments about why you can't take criticism. It only makes you look bad anyway. If people like these poems it's probably because either they've got no experience with good poetry, or they write bad poetry themselves.
Lots of good projects...check out Bad Grammar and Domunique to name a couple, a few too many to mention.
Lightbrite below is a blank profile, seems to be a lot of these about that ruin it for a great site like WEbook.
I expect critism, but not when it is hidden by blank profiles
Lightbrite below is a blank profile, seems to be a lot of these about that ruin it for a great site like WEbook.
I expect critism, but not when it is hidden by blank profiles
"he wish he could had helped him" um...so not good English. no rhyme scheme, amateurish and quite frankly laughable.
I really liked this; it very positive; although, the subject matter is somber. Good luck in your writing efforts!
That's lovely, and so true to life! You have my vote. If you like cats you might like to check out my Haggis story which is also up for voting. :)
OOOooo that's spooky, my Doppleganger in the poetry world. MA big thumbs up to you from me
your words drag me in. I am searching for that peson I wish to spend "one last day" with
your writing draws me in -I am the character you wrote about. Emotions come to light i had thought I had seen no more
wonderful insight... not everyone has the ability to look inward and then write about it for others to see and be able to relate to
I will be back to review as soon as I can...sorry I am extremely busy. Your writing is good though, so you shouldn't have any worries. :-)
the kittys to cute!
Man must be turning into fluffy little kittens.. *huggs kitten..*
Mine..
Man must be turning into fluffy little kittens.. *huggs kitten..*
Mine..
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