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Three Poems

Three poems by Melanie Rae

A few of my poems from Webook.com

Winner! This book has been selected to become one of the next published WEbooks. It is no longer accepting new submissions from outside the project team. To contribute to final revisions before the book goes to print, leave your feedback here.

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ElrodJones

9/26/2009 6:14 PM PDT

You are wonderful! How great this is! Congratulations!

thevoice

8/31/2009 10:11 AM PDT

Imagery:
well done poem my dearest friend misty eyed. you have big heart love your work alwayas god bless mike

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wenniepoo

8/31/2009 9:03 AM PDT

Sorry, I'm late my soul sister, I kept the best for thy last vote, this Poet is worthy by a country mile, fabulous work, a genius with word crafting, stunning to read, absolutely brilliant...time and time again, love Wennie xxxhugs

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moxhp

8/30/2009 12:30 AM PDT

Good luck with the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

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Eviefay

8/26/2009 5:05 PM PDT

Enjoyed the strong images expressed in your poems. A yes vote from me.

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dnaleristap

8/25/2009 2:49 PM PDT

Like a few I have read recently Well structured and well said nicely written
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote

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MsWrite

8/23/2009 10:15 AM PDT

Good Luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/Heart-Whispers

Jenny_Moxham

8/22/2009 6:26 AM PDT

You deserve my vote, so here it is!

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

howifeel1214

8/17/2009 1:04 PM PDT

Lessons lost and Melting mist are the best but i like how in sway u dont do the ussual format for poetry yet its beautiful and i can see it the way u c it

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tattyhead

8/14/2009 11:47 AM PDT

Good Luck with the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

If you have time.

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puddinbutt

8/13/2009 8:42 AM PDT

Melanie Very good writing. Publish for sure

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IvyReed

8/6/2009 11:35 AM PDT

Short and sweet wish your poems would have been longer. I love all your poetry and you dear friend. You have my vote. Good Luck

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tuesday_rayne

8/5/2009 6:33 AM PDT

publish, for sure!

If you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you.

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MarkBrad

8/4/2009 11:03 AM PDT

very nice indeed, i enjoyed the read

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

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pastelspring

8/4/2009 5:39 AM PDT

smile!

santackas

8/3/2009 4:12 PM PDT

Yes, publish this lady's work!!!

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pastelspring

8/3/2009 2:45 PM PDT

thankyou my friend.

nrhatch

8/3/2009 1:45 PM PDT

General:
Sway is my favorite -- a simple observation, worthy of notation.

Tone:
The tone of your poems is slow and grace-filled . . . especially the one you posted below:

Pink and blue aura,
Kindness within.
Vanity shelved,
Mirrored within.
Age brings an essence,
of truth in the light.
Replacing our vanity,
as thieves in the night.
A woman is layered,
Pink frosty icing.
Melting indiginity
Society's offerings

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naiveandwitty

8/3/2009 10:39 AM PDT

Content:
you have my vote.

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Izabela

8/2/2009 4:26 PM PDT

You have my vote. Your poems are simple yet vivid and musical.
Good luck!

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Gereg

8/2/2009 10:45 AM PDT

The first piece is the one I like the best - understated, it makes its case neatly.

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mikemurphy

8/2/2009 6:16 AM PDT

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

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L_egoiste

8/1/2009 7:23 PM PDT

Short and sweet, and I could totally understand them. Nice. Good luck .. oh an ps I don't have a submission myself, so need to return the favour

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Kaoru

8/1/2009 11:54 AM PDT

These are beautiful, Just like the glimpse into your soul that you've allowed us. Thanks! good luck!

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pastelspring

8/1/2009 7:31 AM PDT

thank you patti
you nurtured me all the way
hugs

pattimari

8/1/2009 6:15 AM PDT

publish....good luck

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Blakkthought

8/1/2009 5:41 AM PDT

http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication

Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.

pastelspring

8/1/2009 5:29 AM PDT

a poem I forgot to add to my project...sigh

pastelspring

8/1/2009 5:28 AM PDT

Pink and blue aura,
Kindness within.
Vanity shelved,
Mirrored within.
Age brings an essence,
of truth in the light.
Replacing our vanity,
as thieves in the night.
A woman is layered,
Pink frosty icing.
Melting indiginity
Society's offerings