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Three for the competition
These were written at various times in my life. Inspired by life itself.
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8/31/2009 11:13 PM PDT
The last one was so sweet!
I liked them all.
Very well written.
I liked them all.
Very well written.
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8/31/2009 2:42 PM PDT
Interesting work ...
g'luck
g'luck
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8/29/2009 1:54 PM PDT
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great rememberance of past thanks great reading
good luck god bless mike
great rememberance of past thanks great reading
good luck god bless mike
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8/29/2009 1:38 PM PDT
Thanks for the compliments,and sorry about the spelling mistake/s. I always get my i's and e's mixed up
even after spell checking would you believe ! I think there is a bit of dyslexia here.
even after spell checking would you believe ! I think there is a bit of dyslexia here.
8/29/2009 8:11 AM PDT
I'm glad you remembered the 'other' five million - dissidents, homosexuals and Gypsies - as well as the more commonly remembered six million Jews who died in those camps.
On the other hand, that's not "Arbiet" but 'Arbeit'
On the other hand, that's not "Arbiet" but 'Arbeit'
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8/28/2009 3:58 PM PDT
For Baby so sad, loss is hard to explain, and often we never understand. Mrs. Thompson delightful...flows wonderfully
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8/28/2009 2:26 PM PDT
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8/28/2009 2:25 PM PDT
these poems are great, you have my vote. especially liked Mrs. Thomson, very funny and well-written at the same time.
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8/28/2009 9:18 AM PDT
Ah- you deffinately have my vote. I am very thankful that you crossed my path and that I had the pleasure of viewing your work. Your first submission is so sad but a beautifully written tribute to a life lost but not forever lost in the heart. The second- strong and so very insightful- gives a voice to the dead that so many wanted to sweep the ghosts of under the rug. The third was a refreshing treat. The playful, jumping rhymes that captures the innocent sould of a child is absolutely adorable.
Nice work and very best of luck.
Nice work and very best of luck.
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8/28/2009 7:07 AM PDT
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8/27/2009 6:20 AM PDT
A very good set of poems, showing great emotional range. I'm glad you included "Miss Thompson" in the set; the humorous tone was a welcome change from the sadness of the other two. Well done!
Traci
http://www.webook.com/project/Communion
Traci
http://www.webook.com/project/Communion
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8/24/2009 2:47 PM PDT
A Massive yes from me, i hope you get yours published. I love the in depth at what you write! :) i do hope you win. Good luck chick =)
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8/24/2009 7:31 AM PDT
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8/24/2009 7:19 AM PDT
Great mixture of emotive, thought provoking, and comical yet sweet. Thoroughly enjoyed reading them all.
The best of luck with the vote!
The best of luck with the vote!
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8/23/2009 10:02 PM PDT
Very good, a nice mixture & all beautifully done - Miss Thompson is by far & away my favourite, just loved it - touched so many right buttons. Well done :D
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8/23/2009 5:39 PM PDT
I like the last one. Really cute.
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8/23/2009 5:38 PM PDT
Wow, this is amazing. Very deep and touching. Great job. Definitely a publish from me.
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8/23/2009 10:17 AM PDT
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8/21/2009 11:54 PM PDT
publish Human Wrongs Auschwitz
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8/21/2009 5:54 PM PDT
I see we both are heartfelt by losses. Your poems found their way to my heart. Very warm & caring. I vote YES!
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8/21/2009 3:47 PM PDT
A very brave and moving piece. A hug and a vote !
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8/21/2009 2:38 AM PDT
yes vote
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8/20/2009 2:40 PM PDT
Publish! :]
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8/20/2009 9:39 AM PDT
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Life; what sorrows the heart holds. War still exist, all over the world. There is so much to say on the subject of War.
" War What is it good for."
Content:
Diverse poems
Imagery:
The imagery was vivid
Life; what sorrows the heart holds. War still exist, all over the world. There is so much to say on the subject of War.
" War What is it good for."
Content:
Diverse poems
Imagery:
The imagery was vivid
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8/20/2009 5:43 AM PDT
You have some very poignant poems, your ability to express emotions through your stanzas is quite impressive. You've got my vote!
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8/19/2009 6:14 PM PDT
you go t my vote
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8/19/2009 6:13 PM PDT
voted for ya:)
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8/19/2009 2:55 PM PDT
The poems My Baby and Human Wrongs Auschwitz were deeply personal, sad and very moving. I also loved the Miss Thompson poem which was very very sweet.
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8/19/2009 1:45 PM PDT
Thankyou for your vote as well; lol.
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8/19/2009 1:43 PM PDT
The first two are very touching, sorry for your loss in 'Baby', and to end on a positive and humorist note shows your versitility; I vote yes.
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8/19/2009 9:02 AM PDT
Very moving!! Good luck!
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8/19/2009 1:09 AM PDT
My favorite is the first one. My eyes watered reading it
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8/19/2009 1:08 AM PDT
I love these poems!!!!
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8/18/2009 3:02 PM PDT
So many people to thank here will try to thank every body personally in time.
8/18/2009 1:12 PM PDT
I like Miss Thompson. It reads like a children's book. Nice!
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8/18/2009 10:33 AM PDT
Miss Thompson was my favorite. It was so sweet!
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8/18/2009 9:42 AM PDT
Nice work!
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8/18/2009 7:17 AM PDT
Simple and heart touching
the first two poems are great
thanks for voting for me
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
the first two poems are great
thanks for voting for me
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
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8/17/2009 9:15 PM PDT
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8/17/2009 6:12 PM PDT
The first two pieces do what soul searching poetry should do...bring the reader face forward with reality. Then just about when the tears are unbearable, you give us Miss Thompson
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8/17/2009 5:29 PM PDT
I looked to make sure I had voted... and I did....wonderful poems! Good Luck!
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8/17/2009 4:51 PM PDT
Oh wow... the emotion that I felt with the first poem took my breath away and then to end with a humorous one was awesome.. you have my vote...
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8/17/2009 1:43 PM PDT
It's a yes from me, good luck
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8/17/2009 6:52 AM PDT
Thanks for voting,,goodluck too.
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8/16/2009 7:49 PM PDT
I appreciate the vote. Thank you.
I think your poems pull on our heart strings. In sad and amusing ways. I also like the clear change of voice in Miss Thompson. It reminds me of what being a child was like.
I think your poems pull on our heart strings. In sad and amusing ways. I also like the clear change of voice in Miss Thompson. It reminds me of what being a child was like.
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8/16/2009 7:54 AM PDT
Thanks for the vote, I have voted for you as well!
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8/16/2009 5:05 AM PDT
so sweet, you have my vote.
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8/16/2009 3:29 AM PDT
Three wonderful poems.
"My Baby" and "Human Wrongs Auschwitz" are heartbreaking.
"Miss Thompson" is absolutely cute and funny, what an excellent idea for a poem!
You certainly deserve a Yes vote!
"My Baby" and "Human Wrongs Auschwitz" are heartbreaking.
"Miss Thompson" is absolutely cute and funny, what an excellent idea for a poem!
You certainly deserve a Yes vote!
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8/15/2009 10:26 PM PDT
Ma'am, with a profound dignity for the human
condition you convey to catharsis the pain
suffered by the bereaved. In a popular culture
that values desensitisation it is an honour
to vote for a poet of the old school, yet timeless.
It is my honour to give you a vote.
condition you convey to catharsis the pain
suffered by the bereaved. In a popular culture
that values desensitisation it is an honour
to vote for a poet of the old school, yet timeless.
It is my honour to give you a vote.
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8/15/2009 9:51 PM PDT
the third poem is very cute.
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8/15/2009 1:29 PM PDT
This is definitely a yes vote. Based on all the previous feedback, you don't need me to tell you how beautiful your poems are. You have a very powerful way with words that I'm quite envious of!!
Couple of typos in the 2nd poem - I think someone's already pointed out the German one.
"Thier intense sadness and fear"
"I shall never foget"
Should be 'their' and 'forget'. Don't worry though, it doesn't detract from the overall experience of reading your work, which feels like a privilege.
I truly wish you every success with your work - you write as though have a knack for seeing through the eye of your subject and it would be wonderful to see this and more your work recognised for the excellent qualities they possess. All the best and good luck with the vote (although based on the feedback below, you probably don't need it!!)
Couple of typos in the 2nd poem - I think someone's already pointed out the German one.
"Thier intense sadness and fear"
"I shall never foget"
Should be 'their' and 'forget'. Don't worry though, it doesn't detract from the overall experience of reading your work, which feels like a privilege.
I truly wish you every success with your work - you write as though have a knack for seeing through the eye of your subject and it would be wonderful to see this and more your work recognised for the excellent qualities they possess. All the best and good luck with the vote (although based on the feedback below, you probably don't need it!!)
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8/15/2009 12:13 PM PDT
Your first poem was beautiful. Keep up the great work.
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8/15/2009 9:38 AM PDT
Your poems were delightful, especially the last one! The first one was a very sad tale, but very nicely crafted. The second one was a gem! Honest and brutal - which is exactly what that part of history was.
Very well done...yes vote!
Anna
Very well done...yes vote!
Anna
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8/15/2009 8:42 AM PDT
Good stuff and good luck!
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8/15/2009 7:11 AM PDT
Human Wrongs Auschwitz - I voted to publish. The subject of this poem should enrage anyone with a heart, and the rhythm of the poem, rather than detracting from the subject, drives the point home.
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8/15/2009 5:28 AM PDT
I agree with the others, the first two was the best
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8/15/2009 2:22 AM PDT
the first two got my vote, they were very touching and took into account very real situations. Two very tragic events and the moment we forget and start taking our life for granted will be the day that it all comes again.
goodluck
Amy
goodluck
Amy
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8/15/2009 1:45 AM PDT
really good work, the first 2 were really sad, I can't imagin losing a child or being a part of the holocast, you made your points very well,the last one was really cute, good job on all 3, I voted yes
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8/14/2009 11:50 PM PDT
very compelling read. well done. vote in
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8/14/2009 8:25 PM PDT
the last one
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8/14/2009 8:25 PM PDT
charming
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8/14/2009 8:24 PM PDT
i just think the form part was a funny question in general. i didn't mean anything snarky. just wasn't sure what else to say.
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8/14/2009 8:22 PM PDT
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This was touching, but i feel that the meaning could be enhanced if you wrote another version that didn't rhyme. the form distracts from the content i feel. and may i say, i'm very sorry for your loss.
Form:
Correct? Nicely done.
Content:
Honest and real and painful. you're strong to write about it. i'm sure it's cathartic.
Imagery:
"A leaflet on Cot death" - nice
Tone:
could be less distracting but very somber.
Musicality:
well done
This was touching, but i feel that the meaning could be enhanced if you wrote another version that didn't rhyme. the form distracts from the content i feel. and may i say, i'm very sorry for your loss.
Form:
Correct? Nicely done.
Content:
Honest and real and painful. you're strong to write about it. i'm sure it's cathartic.
Imagery:
"A leaflet on Cot death" - nice
Tone:
could be less distracting but very somber.
Musicality:
well done
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8/14/2009 3:20 PM PDT
The first two poems, though depressing were very special and moving. The last poem had a light feel to it, though I do not at all understand it. Anyway, overall great work. I said publish.
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8/14/2009 2:44 PM PDT
good job I say Publish
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8/14/2009 8:26 AM PDT
I'm touched by these pieces. Publish
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8/14/2009 6:07 AM PDT
Two very raw and moving pieces, and one a lot lighter that adds some much needed relief. Powerful work, and best of luck for the vote.
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8/14/2009 4:03 AM PDT
I always find poems on history and human experiences to be of a higher league,on their own for they hold the key to our future.Lest we repeat past mistakes.
A yes vote from me.Loved Human wrongs by the way.
If you got time,please check out this;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun
A yes vote from me.Loved Human wrongs by the way.
If you got time,please check out this;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun
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8/13/2009 2:15 PM PDT
Two heart rending poems, very well written. The third was very different but very well written and enjoyable.
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8/13/2009 6:46 AM PDT
A Yes from me. All Three said what they needed to say.
Have a look at mine if you will
Have a look at mine if you will
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8/12/2009 9:40 PM PDT
Sad, yet grand. I vote to publish
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8/12/2009 7:50 PM PDT
good poetry. I vote to publish
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8/12/2009 6:11 PM PDT
I can relate to my baby a little. My mom lost my big sister she'd died inside here.
But all your poems are so good.
These should be published.
But all your poems are so good.
These should be published.
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8/12/2009 5:59 PM PDT
"Miss Thompson" is a clever take on an ordinary moment in childhood that adults rarely notice. It is a gift to notice childhood's precious moments and document them in verse.
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8/12/2009 3:44 PM PDT
MY BABY IS THE JEWEL OF THIS PROJECT
PUBLISH
PUBLISH
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8/12/2009 3:10 PM PDT
Sweet
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8/12/2009 3:10 PM PDT
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O.M.G i hope many, many people vote for this one as i believe you have put in words how most of civilised humans feel about those camps and that man!
O.M.G i hope many, many people vote for this one as i believe you have put in words how most of civilised humans feel about those camps and that man!
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8/11/2009 7:55 PM PDT
Very nice!!
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8/11/2009 7:47 PM PDT
Very good (: PUBLISH!!
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8/11/2009 3:23 PM PDT
The first 'My Baby' is heartbreaking but healing. Number 2 is a hearfelt tribute to those who died 'becoming free through work' (!) and Miss Thompson is hilarious! Good luck!
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8/11/2009 10:19 AM PDT
I loved them, please publish webook :)
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8/11/2009 1:25 AM PDT
I would like to thank every one who looks comments or votes in any way they chose.
8/10/2009 9:55 PM PDT
Your poem on Auschwitz was enough to grab my attention . . . what a profoundly sad place. My visit there in 1979 changed my life. You do have a couple of spelling errors in that (the German should read "Arbeit Macht Frei") but I applaud your choice of topic. "My Baby" is sad and touching.
Best of luck to you.
Best of luck to you.
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8/10/2009 9:20 PM PDT
very powerful. I voted for you to be published.
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8/10/2009 8:29 PM PDT
I VOTED FOR YOU!
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8/10/2009 7:12 PM PDT
very powerful poetry. very nice job. you have my vote.
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8/10/2009 5:43 PM PDT
Apart from a few rough edges I found these poems well written and you certainly have plenty of talent.
The content was harrowing, emotionally distressing and in the case of Miss Thompson charming and innocent.
I voted for you mainly on content and flow and because of your obvious talent.
Good luck with the vote and my deep sympathy with the loss of Paul who I am sure is always in your thoughts.
Kind Regards John
The content was harrowing, emotionally distressing and in the case of Miss Thompson charming and innocent.
I voted for you mainly on content and flow and because of your obvious talent.
Good luck with the vote and my deep sympathy with the loss of Paul who I am sure is always in your thoughts.
Kind Regards John
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8/10/2009 2:00 PM PDT
Thank you so much for reading my work because I thoroughly enjoyed yours. Especially "Miss Thompson," I'm a sucker for a cute poem.
Good Work and Good Luck!
Good Work and Good Luck!
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8/10/2009 1:00 PM PDT
You have a yes!
Well done you ...
Well done you ...
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8/10/2009 9:59 AM PDT
I got chills on the first one. Second one needs to be said. and third just is too darn cute! You got my vote.
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8/10/2009 8:35 AM PDT
I love the first one, a lot of feeling in it. The last one in the point of view of a little boy was cute, loved your poems.
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8/9/2009 5:39 PM PDT
Great, emotional poems.
Its a yes from me.
Good luck and thank you for voting for my poems.
xxx
Its a yes from me.
Good luck and thank you for voting for my poems.
xxx
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8/9/2009 3:53 PM PDT
I am very grateful thank you.
8/9/2009 1:00 PM PDT
I am in agreement with a publishing idea :).
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8/8/2009 5:32 PM PDT
This is really sad poem =( but I can feel the emotions as i read it good job :)
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8/8/2009 11:04 AM PDT
Very emotional pieces of work, well written and vividly visual. Good Luck
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8/8/2009 8:14 AM PDT
I really like them all, especialy "My Baby": was so emotive. You have my vote
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8/8/2009 5:24 AM PDT
General:
vote submitted...
Content:
touching..
My favorite is " My Baby "
vote submitted...
Content:
touching..
My favorite is " My Baby "
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8/8/2009 5:00 AM PDT
Powerful haunting subject matter. Good luck!
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8/8/2009 1:27 AM PDT
I loved Miss Thompson. Beautiful!
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8/7/2009 10:27 PM PDT
MOST DEFINITELY PUBLISH THIS COLLECTION
"My Baby" is a real tugger of heart strings...full of raw emotion for SIDS (Sudden InfantDeath Syndrome).
"Human Wrongs Auschwitz"...I still think it warrants a footnote interpreting what "Arbiet Mach Frie" means.
"Miss Thompson" is my OVERALL FAVOURITE not only of this collection, but of ALL the poems that I have read in this competition so far. I LOVE MISS THOMPSON and would probably marry her twice myself if given half a chance.
"My Baby" is a real tugger of heart strings...full of raw emotion for SIDS (Sudden InfantDeath Syndrome).
"Human Wrongs Auschwitz"...I still think it warrants a footnote interpreting what "Arbiet Mach Frie" means.
"Miss Thompson" is my OVERALL FAVOURITE not only of this collection, but of ALL the poems that I have read in this competition so far. I LOVE MISS THOMPSON and would probably marry her twice myself if given half a chance.
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8/7/2009 3:45 PM PDT
Hell Yeah
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8/7/2009 2:34 PM PDT
these pieces have a real message. I felt the pain of the first one. I have voted for you and hope you the best.
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
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8/7/2009 1:32 PM PDT
Very good, especially the 1st one.
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8/7/2009 12:47 PM PDT
Miss Thompson is touching, you have my vote.
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8/7/2009 10:28 AM PDT
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8/7/2009 6:56 AM PDT
Woah that was really moving it actualy braught tears to my eyes i hope your poems get published there amazing (:
Best wishes
Nessa (: x
Best wishes
Nessa (: x
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8/7/2009 1:50 AM PDT
Do you know people I am overwhelmed by the positive comments I have received and given the chance would thank each and every one of you. For my part I am trawling my way through all the poetry and just hope to see everything !
8/6/2009 3:59 PM PDT
these are very moving and well written, thanks for the invite you have my vote
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8/6/2009 3:38 PM PDT
The first one, My Baby, brought tears to my eyes.
Lovely, moving poetry. Wonderful! You got a yes vote from me!
~Kate
Lovely, moving poetry. Wonderful! You got a yes vote from me!
~Kate
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8/6/2009 8:16 AM PDT
Yes - heartfelt publish
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8/6/2009 7:21 AM PDT
heart breaking.... voted.... shah. x
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8/6/2009 4:19 AM PDT
Voted
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8/6/2009 4:17 AM PDT
Very sweet, heartfelt, yet sad poem is, My Baby.
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8/5/2009 10:37 PM PDT
PUBLISH!!! i liked these very much.
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
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8/5/2009 5:18 PM PDT
Amazing. You have looked back and pulled up on many things that have influenced you in life. The variety also makes them interesting to read. I can't think what else to say.
If anyone's interested:
http://www.webook.com/project/Charliemadmans-Poetry
That's mine.
If anyone's interested:
http://www.webook.com/project/Charliemadmans-Poetry
That's mine.
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8/5/2009 2:54 PM PDT
I am glad you like my work lime I greatly appreciate the comments and will surely check yours if I havent already done so.
8/5/2009 12:36 PM PDT
i love your poetry collection! it is the best i have read so far! The Baby is so sad and very touching. I am very interested in the holocaust, so i was very glad to see Human Wrongs Auschwitz. Miss Thompson was warm and cheery. you write amazing poetry, i love it! i hope you can get it published! I definitely vote "yes" for your poetry.
if you'd like, please check out my poetry submission
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
if you'd like, please check out my poetry submission
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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8/4/2009 11:25 AM PDT
Its great that you can write both comedy and tragedy equally well.
My baby moved me to tears but Miss Thompson cheered me up.
You get my vote.
My baby moved me to tears but Miss Thompson cheered me up.
You get my vote.
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8/4/2009 5:49 AM PDT
I have voted for this as its fab it made me chuckle!!
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8/3/2009 5:24 PM PDT
Love Mrs. Thompson. CF
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8/3/2009 10:25 AM PDT
I really loved these excellent
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8/3/2009 7:02 AM PDT
Ta very much you also have mine.
8/3/2009 5:40 AM PDT
I wish you luck. You have my vote.
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8/2/2009 2:25 PM PDT
Content:
What a wide range of content . . . from infant death syndrome . . . to Nazi war crimes . . . to a youthful crush. Way to mix it up!
Tone:
Quite varied between the three poems. The first and second, sad, and the third, light hearted and fun.
Good Luck.
What a wide range of content . . . from infant death syndrome . . . to Nazi war crimes . . . to a youthful crush. Way to mix it up!
Tone:
Quite varied between the three poems. The first and second, sad, and the third, light hearted and fun.
Good Luck.
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8/2/2009 12:11 PM PDT
I am gtateful to all who take time to read wheteher they vote or not am happy. I t nice to have ones work read.
8/2/2009 12:09 PM PDT
Why thank you for you kind comments, I personally fee that it is one of my best,but goo enough ? Who knows.
8/2/2009 1:37 AM PDT
A yes vote.
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8/1/2009 11:43 PM PDT
thumbs up esp miss thompson which made me smile lots
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8/1/2009 5:41 PM PDT
Content:
"Human Wrongs Auschwitz"
a fabulous write.
I vote that it be published.
"Human Wrongs Auschwitz"
a fabulous write.
I vote that it be published.
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8/1/2009 11:47 AM PDT
Terrific to hear some folks like my work
8/1/2009 11:47 AM PDT
People so kind.
8/1/2009 11:46 AM PDT
Ta very much all.
8/1/2009 6:16 AM PDT
publish
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7/25/2009 4:40 PM PDT
I loved these poems, because they stirred emotions. The first, so sad and so poignant. The second very thought provoking and the third was funny but also touching and sweet.
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6/16/2009 7:01 AM PDT
best of luck for the upcoming vote.
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