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Three love poems for three poem competition
I choose these three poems because the have the subject of love fine tuned into them and I have always been able to express feelings better when writing about lovely subjects.
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"Hold your Hands Like This" makes me think of hands coming together in prayer, especially with the allusions to blood and skin, which are reminiscent of Christ's garden prayer. The repetition gives it a rhythm and an urgency. "I love my love" is a bit of a tongue twister and a puzzle (and it does refer to the puzzle of you and I in the last lines). The best is "I love you in Whispers," which makes a tangible symbol out of the whispers and shows the most creativity of all the three poems. The climactic feeling of "How are we talking / I can barely breathe," gives immense power to the poem, and the speaker wants to live in the moment of great passion, not caring much about what tomorrow might bring. Beautifully written.
Please check out my submissions if you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209
Please check out my submissions if you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209
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The poems have a great flow of words. They're great. I vote yes.
Hopefully you have the chance to look at mine
http://www.webook.com/project/Teens-and-life
Love,
Ana
Hopefully you have the chance to look at mine
http://www.webook.com/project/Teens-and-life
Love,
Ana
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brilliant poetry! i'm so glad you submitted it for the vote! i hope it gets published!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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poetface, you are a gifted writer with a mind of gold.
i vote publish.
i vote publish.
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