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Three of my best Poems......
I write of many things, most hopefully are of interest to a broad spectrum of readers... I am as comfortable in the dark as I am in the light, having known both. I humbly put forth these three selections in hopes they will be enjoyed by you the readers and may then, in turn, earn your votes.......
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8/31/2009 6:56 AM PDT
I just wanted to wish you good luck one more time! i love you
8/29/2009 11:53 PM PDT
8/28/2009 11:16 PM PDT
To Dream Life would be my favorite, absolutly, without a doubt, definatly publish. You have a style and realistic if not wild nature in your writings that is placed well in the poem, you are gifted. Smiles, and thank you for voting on my poems. sincerely, Nica
8/28/2009 10:35 AM PDT
I am very fond of your writing style. You have true talent that I enjoy reading in each piece you hand as a gift for the reader to read. Excellent work- you have my support and vote. Good luck!
8/27/2009 6:27 PM PDT
8/26/2009 1:54 PM PDT
General:
I'd like to talk about "Mirror" because that is the highlight of your collection for me.
Form:
I am not sure that I get much from the structure of the poem, but the free verse is impeccable.
Imagery:
Strong images here. An entire scene is displayed vividly, and it brings depth to your words.
Tone:
dark, but i do love dark.
best of luck. and thanks for the vote!
I'd like to talk about "Mirror" because that is the highlight of your collection for me.
Form:
I am not sure that I get much from the structure of the poem, but the free verse is impeccable.
Imagery:
Strong images here. An entire scene is displayed vividly, and it brings depth to your words.
Tone:
dark, but i do love dark.
best of luck. and thanks for the vote!
8/26/2009 12:48 PM PDT
Deeeep! And kinda dark, I thoroughly enjoyed all three, all original, and I liked the style in which you created them. Good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked
http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked
8/26/2009 12:22 PM PDT
Visuals are stunning. I love how you are so in depth, wih as few words as possible. Hope you get much more votes as this competition winds down. Good Luck.
8/26/2009 11:13 AM PDT
Wonderful poems great visuals .......
8/26/2009 10:41 AM PDT
Bathroom Mirror really spoke to me, nice work.
8/24/2009 7:52 AM PDT
Wonderful command of the English language, great imagery.
I vote publish for sure!!
The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
I vote publish for sure!!
The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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8/23/2009 10:31 AM PDT
Your work is a powerful example of how not every poem has to have high drama to impact readers. The child interrupting a drinking session was a worrisome situation, adopting a happy face as a protective device, as well as observing the magic of nature are all subjects others can relate to. Please continue to write and grow.
COME LOOK AT MY PROJEKT!!
COME LOOK AT MY PROJEKT!!
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8/23/2009 10:30 AM PDT
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8/20/2009 11:37 AM PDT
great poetry! keep up the magnificent writing!
I hope to see your work published!!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
I hope to see your work published!!!!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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8/18/2009 7:20 AM PDT
Nice
You've got my vote
here's my poems, you might like, if so vote please
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
You've got my vote
here's my poems, you might like, if so vote please
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
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8/18/2009 2:24 AM PDT
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8/17/2009 4:31 PM PDT
You have a great feel for words. Be real and raw. Use your talent to say what life love etc is to you.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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8/16/2009 9:54 AM PDT
Your work always carries me to another place...you are amazing!!!
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8/13/2009 8:28 AM PDT
You know I'd love to see your name in print. You are awesome, and your work is a paradigm for poets everywhere! PUBLISH!!!
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8/12/2009 7:21 PM PDT
Anybody who has read your work on WEbook will agree santackas that you are definitely a creative genius. The way you craft Poetry... opens eyes to understand, just how this world of beautiful art ticks. Your work should be published as it is more than worthy, love Wennie xxxhugs
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8/11/2009 2:42 PM PDT
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8/9/2009 12:05 PM PDT
Great Imagery. Perfect You got my vote.
Check out mine? http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart
Please and thank you!
Check out mine? http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart
Please and thank you!
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8/8/2009 8:14 PM PDT
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8/8/2009 12:18 PM PDT
I have read your work before, these 3 are really good, to dream life, remindes me a little of Jim Morrison's work, I liked the format, and content, good writing, I voted yes.
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8/7/2009 11:25 PM PDT
Your poetry invokes many vivid thoughts, all flowing within themselves. The way you set out your poem is quite interesting and generally adds to the whole 'feel' of the poem. Good work.
Keep up the awesomeness, indeed.
Keep up the awesomeness, indeed.
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8/7/2009 9:10 PM PDT
General:
I'm sure Coleridge would enjoy your poems!
Form:
Nice flow. Have you considered experimenting with different forms to add variety?
Content:
The emotion recollected in your poems is very powerful.
Imagery:
Your word choice is vivd, mysterious, and precise, creating sharp and penetrating mind pictures.
Tone:
The tone of your poems is hopeless and dark.
Musicality:
The flow of images is logical and beautiful.
I'm sure Coleridge would enjoy your poems!
Form:
Nice flow. Have you considered experimenting with different forms to add variety?
Content:
The emotion recollected in your poems is very powerful.
Imagery:
Your word choice is vivd, mysterious, and precise, creating sharp and penetrating mind pictures.
Tone:
The tone of your poems is hopeless and dark.
Musicality:
The flow of images is logical and beautiful.
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8/7/2009 4:55 PM PDT
I'm giving you my vote because I appreciate that you have actually put some thought and work into your poems, which is more than I can say for pretty much every other submission I have seen so far. You have talent, and I don't say that to many people on here.
My only complaint is that I wish you had submitted 3 poems with varying structures, rather than using a similar one for all three. But still, I enjoyed them.
My only complaint is that I wish you had submitted 3 poems with varying structures, rather than using a similar one for all three. But still, I enjoyed them.
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8/7/2009 1:10 PM PDT
As always I enjoyed your poetry and the choices you made for submission are great. Cool! Pub this one WEbook.
Best regards,
~g
Best regards,
~g
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8/7/2009 11:43 AM PDT
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8/7/2009 11:14 AM PDT
I could of sworn I voted before! I probably read it prior to the voting and missed going back...well anyway here I am with a very positive vote:)
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8/6/2009 4:23 PM PDT
I find your writing such a joy, there is a feel and flow that just glides from the page, I can not chose a favourite of the 3 but I can say you deserve inclusion in the final book, very best of luck to you, you have my vote :)
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8/6/2009 3:36 PM PDT
Amazing! I voted yes!
~Kate
~Kate
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8/6/2009 12:54 PM PDT
Form:
Free verse that does not hold the reader hostage.
Imagery:
You share what you are seeing with great skill
Tone:
Darker than is my preference.
Musicality:
Great flow to all three poems.
Free verse that does not hold the reader hostage.
Imagery:
You share what you are seeing with great skill
Tone:
Darker than is my preference.
Musicality:
Great flow to all three poems.
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8/5/2009 12:21 PM PDT
a yes vote
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8/5/2009 11:32 AM PDT
I've told u before, that I enjoy your work... Bathroom Mirror is my favorite. Publish!
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8/5/2009 9:37 AM PDT
A definite yes. Good luck!
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8/5/2009 6:22 AM PDT
wow, you are a definite yes vote from me!!!
great writing...
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you and good luck too!
great writing...
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you and good luck too!
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8/4/2009 9:59 PM PDT
Great stuff, as I've commented before. I wish you all the best, although your work doesn't need my good wishes to stand successful!
http://www.webook.com/project/Neopolitan-Poetry
http://www.webook.com/project/Neopolitan-Poetry
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8/4/2009 4:38 PM PDT
A note to thank you all for your support in this endeavor.... it is so much apprciated!!! As ever, I am humbled by your comments. Thank you.
8/4/2009 1:25 PM PDT
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8/4/2009 10:50 AM PDT
Deserves to be heard and published
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8/4/2009 7:47 AM PDT
your voice is clear and deliberate. each line has been chiseled to perfection. a great collect indeed.
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8/3/2009 3:21 PM PDT
Brilliant as usual, great imagery, extraordinary delivery of thoughts and with all that they are even a delight to read LOL. BDC
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8/3/2009 2:18 PM PDT
Done! I had every intention on voting for you. Shockingly, my collection is in the vote as well. If you like my material, please vote for me. But let it be an honest vote. I don't want to trade favors. I really like your work.
My collection is called "Confusion Over The Meaning Life" It's in the Human Interest genre.
See ya!
Susan
My collection is called "Confusion Over The Meaning Life" It's in the Human Interest genre.
See ya!
Susan
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8/3/2009 10:35 AM PDT
voted yes
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8/3/2009 8:33 AM PDT
i vote publish.
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8/2/2009 9:13 PM PDT
Always inspiring with poignant and piercing imagery...Love'em ~S...All the best and thumbs up all the way!
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8/2/2009 4:07 PM PDT
Good luck - I really like your work in all it's honesty.
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8/2/2009 8:08 AM PDT
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8/2/2009 1:23 AM PDT
With all sincerity I can say a vote of confidence for Santackas is a vote for a revival of quality literature.
In aknowledgement of an author that I feel takes
honoured place amongst the great poets of our time:
I humbly wish a true winner a well-deserved victory.
In aknowledgement of an author that I feel takes
honoured place amongst the great poets of our time:
I humbly wish a true winner a well-deserved victory.
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8/1/2009 1:22 PM PDT
You're work is very inspiring, santackas, you deserve to be publish. You've got my vote. Best of luck!
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8/1/2009 11:55 AM PDT
I have loved your expressive poetry for a long time.
I say publish
I say publish
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8/1/2009 9:09 AM PDT
You know I'm a fan Santackas :D I've always loved your work, especially your poem Bathroom Mirror, good luck to you Santackas, I definately voted :D
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8/1/2009 9:02 AM PDT
Vote
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8/1/2009 7:34 AM PDT
Linda good luck! you really deserve to be publish.
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8/1/2009 5:49 AM PDT
I enjoy your writting...
voted...
voted...
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8/1/2009 5:44 AM PDT
Imagery:
publish
publish
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8/1/2009 4:50 AM PDT
voted
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8/1/2009 2:44 AM PDT
I hope you'll get published.I've read your poetry before and voted today.
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7/5/2009 4:34 AM PDT
Your poems are really brilliant. They speak earnestly to the soul, and reflect what most of us are bound to feel at some stage or another in our lives!
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6/23/2009 1:50 PM PDT
This project contains poignant, piercing, impassioned expressions of life-changing perceptions that speak both to the intellect and the soul, with the driving heart of a modern-day philospher. Simply riveting!
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