Delightful wordplay.

Good luck with the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

'Postrophe' is worth every bit of my vote all on its own -- delightful!

I really liked these!

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

Excellent Work.

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

General:
Go Underwearld!



Content:
Origninal, funny without being slapstick.

Imagery:
Great imagery in this one especially when we move down to Hell.

Awesome ;-)

http://www.webook.com/project/Jens-three-best-poems-on-mystical-freedom

General:
Genius work! The freshness of the subjects is enthralling, and leaves one with a smile, or a tear that one cannot forget.

I would love to get your feedback on my submissions if you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209

Form:
Unexpected, revitalizing.  The play and dissection of words in "'postrophe" is out'o this world.  "Underwearld" has hidden rhymes everywhere, alliteration and other playful tricks that add to the magic of the piece and to its whimsical flavor.  "Siamese Son" uses a more rigid rhyming pattern in accordance with the more sober subject.

Content:
Fantastic, clever, new, unique.  The creativity displayed in the choice of contents speaks through each word, each verse, each image.  Every verse is a new surprise.  In "'postrophe" it all comes together at the end and the reader slowly gets the hang of.  Similarly in "Siamese Son" one understands how the title ties into the piece when reading the last lines.  I couldn't help but to read each poem a few times to renovate that wonderful feeling these works produce.

Tone:
"'postrophe" and "Underwearld" have a playful, somewhat satirical voice.  "Siamese Son" does the opposite by touching a very deep concept and there is a seriousness in it that stands well in contrast to the other pieces.  A great show of talent to be able to jump at ease from one set of emotions to another.

Musicality:
Like laughter for the first two, tickling every part of my intellect.

great poetry!  keep up the great writing!
I hope your pieces get published!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School

Forgot to mention I also thought underwearl was ace.

Siamese Son I have voted publish for this alone I think is brilliant. Of the three was my favourite.


http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition



If you have time.

I voted

General:
Wordsworth - the child is father to the man.  I haven't thought of it since highschool

Form:
The last line reminds me of a poem I read 40 years ago.  I think  "the son is father to the man" was one of the lines.

You already had my vote with 'underwear', but this one, like many of your works, hits close to the bone.  I wish I'd read it 30 years ago - but then I wouldn't have listened.
SE

this is a great collection.

i vote publish.

this is special well done you have my vote

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

i think that you are an amazing poet. I loved Siamese son, but the other two weren't bad either. i vote to publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/3-4-poetry-contest

General:
Excellent... loved the humor, loved the sing-song style.

Form:
I know it's structured, but I'm not sure if there's a specific name for the style.

Content:
Strange topic, but it made me chuckle. -- nice off set from all the serious hard core super deep world changing poetry out there. Sometimes we need a break from the hard deep crap of the world, and this piece was that.

Imagery:
Vivid word choice and use of language.

Tone:
Upbeat and light, yet with the underworld tone perhaps a little darkness...

Musicality:
Very musical almost like a nursery rhyme... a very peculiar nursery rhyme, but an unforgettable tale of undergarments.

Brilliant piece,

~t.

These are great.  I especially love "Underwearld".  Good Luck.. CF

Beautiful poetry! - A yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.