General:
vote submitted....

Content:
touching, beautiful, relative in nature...
good work...

heart felt and sad and sweet  lovely

Good work. Voted.

And if you have time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

I love how each of your poems  are felt, and My Youngest child brought a tear to my eye as I read it. They were all beautifully written, well done ;)

Publish!

I voted publish, good luck :)

Voted... good luck... Shah.

If you've time...http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

;-) X

Very Good, Publish!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

Beautiful poetry. Loved the last one. You got my vote.

Check out mine? http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart

Please and thank you!

good poems... the last one is rather sad. I do hope he is still with you, and always in your heart.
PUBLISH!!!


if you want to read mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

very nicely done and a yes from me!

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

Good storytelling

these are very good well done i enjoyed reading them and wish you luck


http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Publish!

~Kate

very nice poetry. good luck to you, you have my vote.

nice poetry!  i hope you can get it published!!!

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School

voted for you. Good luck!

I thought I had already reviewed these pieces, but evidently I did not leave feedback at the time as I was interupted here at the house.  But they should be published especially, the one obout the puppy I am a dog lover.  Publish

Form:
this is a good collection of poems. i love the content and form.

General:
Interesting collection of love poems, demonstrating the many types of love we can experience in life.

Imagery:
Lacking -- I didn't see puppies until the very last line of You Took Me. 



Tone:
Although the overall tone of My Youngest Child was accepting, the following stanza seemed judgmental and harsh:

Your sexual urges, are wrong and pained,
And forever your soul is stained,
Your life is lost its shining grace,
A child for my youngest child.



Musicality:
My Youngest Child seemed quite somber, rather than loving, light and joyous. 

Once I realized that it was the runt of the litter "speaking,"  You Took Me" put a smile on my face . . . I always root for the underdog.

Write On!

I read this long before the voting was open, and I really enjoyed it!! SO I CAME BACK TO VOTE YES! ^_^


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http://www.webook.com/project/Simple-3

Definantly A Yes From Kirby-Jane

All The Best Mate

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

Your work is interesting.  I love the youngest child piece.  Good luck to you.  And thanks for asking me to visit here.

top marks and thumbs up from me

I vote that your work be published.

Thought I'd give you a bit of help with your project. Hope for help in return.

http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication

Great pieces, you got my  vote
Return the favor plz.

I really enjoyed these poems, I am sorry I could not find the time to review them earlier, but the perspectives on love were very unique and separate from our normal conceptions about Love. Beautifully well done, good luck to you int he coming votes!!!