You already know my feelings about your works as I commented on them previously.

I think you are a great talent and have thoroughly enjoyed your works.

I will look forward to reading more of your works in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.

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Very moving poetry.  Amazing how two people could love so much yet find no way to be together unttil their souls might meet in nevermore.  The Host ....The imagery is incredible.  Raw emotion is displayed in words that build a sorrowful end to the soul.

I voted yes to publish

Good luck
Niyahlove
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Gets my vote good luck

A really nice duet, and your third poem provides variety in mood and tone.  Well chosen set!

your work is stunning, I want it published!
Good luck for the next few days, Sunyata

Voted... good luck ;-)

Shah. X

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Very nice I like the bottom one best! Good luck I voted for you.

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Your poems make me sad  But your messages are clear.  I enjoy your rhymes   Poems that rhyme flow better in my opinion Nicely done
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"A picture without an artist’s vision" love this line. i think you could expound upon what's causing this feeling the one incision...what was it caused by?

"It became a forgotten bookmark" - love that image i like that u showed this poem from both perspectives.

General:
the opening is lovely. and is a very interesting phrase. and i like the circular feel that the idea is repeated @ the end.

Content:
One day, left him for dead. - the meter of this isn't quite right with the rest of the poem.

Both of the souls shared the same fate, it's kinda tear jerking, very well written. The flow was so smooth. Overall there is something in these poems that brings the reader in, very very well done.

The Host had some really good imagery in it, some of the pictures it drew actually kinda scared me to be honest, but that's a good thing ;)

Publish! and goodluck

voted for ya

Great work... you  have my vote please check out mine. My link is broken but if you go to  my page its The unveiling of the unravel. Thanks and Good luck

I like the poems from the different perspectives.  They are engaging, only they sounded very similar.  The Host has great premise to it.  I did find the reading had many break points for poetry inside a line.

These poems are beautiful! I especially liked the two poems about the land of nevermore. Simply lovely!
Please consider voting for my project:
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thanks in advance for your consideration,
    Bia-la

Grand worlk I vote, publish!!

Nice work.
Got my vote;
if you got time;
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I voted for you

Three beautiful poems, I loved the 2 Nevermore poems most.
Beautiful flow and rhyming.
I vote publish. Good luck!
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Hey BP, I hardly even had to read the poems before I voted for publication 'cause I knew they'd be amazing... and to no surprise... they were! Excellent works!

You are so amazing...I know you have this in the bag!!!

General:
Enjoyed all three -- but my fave was the first of the two Nevermore poems.

Form:
Lovely, lyrical, flowing rhymes enhanced the poem.

Content:
You convey deep regret and bitterness, together with a stubborn refusal to let go of the past in order to embrace "tomorrow's future." 

Tone:
Slow, heavy, and quiet.

Write on!

Your script undulates like the night sea.
Your haunting phrasing display an undeniable  command
of the English language. A bewitching trilogy of poems.

You conjure images like an opiate vapour or that of a seer that wavers ethereally while remaining potent.
My compliments.

enjoyed.

loved the flow and tempo of the nevermore duo. great job.. PUBLISH!!

General:
vote submitted...


here is my link:

http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best


like what you see, leave a vote and or some feedback...

Content:
My favorite is " The Host "

internally fleeting....



great work....

The nevermore pieces are of particular note, with elegant language and a nice meter. Best of luck with the vote !

You got a vote from me, good work.

I really like how "the realm of nevermore" poems have a story rooted deep in the rythym and masterful crafting of words. Great work! got my vote.

good work! hope you get published

There is much to like about your work.  Certainly worthy of publication and on occasion the alliteration is excellent.

Good luck with the vote.

Regards  John

These poems are really good. I wish you good luck!

Good Luck.


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If you have the time.

You have talent. Keep it up. I vote yes.
Love,
 Ana

these are some of the best i have read, you have my vote, good luck, well done

'The Host' is thought provoking and incredible. You have my vote.

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Beautiful! You have my vote.

Please check out mine?
http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart

Please and thank you!

Hello dear friend, firstly nevermore has always been a favourite of mine, it's whole make-up is crafted in silk, so you definitely had my vote before reading them again, as for Host again your individuality is your charm, I have no doubts your work will be successful, I hope also that the people reviewing and voting find time to visit more of your work, you are a gifted writer Jess, very best of luck, hugs Dante

I like these, it was the first 'the realm of nevermore' that made me vote publish.
well done
Good luck

These three are unquestionably some of your best work!!! More than happy to caste my vote for one of my favorite poets!!

         If you can find the time i would love for you to read my entries!!
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Content:
i love the content and form.

great work.

Without a doubt a vote yes

Amazing work...I am impressed with your bleeding heart! Yes...indeed!

This was amazing. You have my vote.

It was really great. You have a wonderful talent!!!

3 really good poems,interesting point, the body being just the host, nice work, you got my vote.

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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Excellent. You got my vote. Return the favor plz.
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General:
The poems were amazing. I enjoyed reading them. Thanks for inviting me to vote.

Form:
I really liked that you included two poems that went hand in hand and told two different sides of the story.  The rhyme scheme was fantastic in the last poem, and so very different from your usual style.

Content:
" I lost all my ability to stop the volatility that kept growng from someplace internal." FABULOUS LINE!!  My favorite of the third poem. The first two were very rhythmic in nature and excellent reads. The wording was fantastic as you took your reader into the tortured hearts of the two souls lost to each other and reunited in the afterlife.

Imagery:
I felt the pain of the man as he wasted his life without true love, and I could also relate to the womans version of the story as well. I could envision the two of them living out their empty lives, longing for one another in a place where the timing was never right. Timing is, afterall, everything.

Tone:
A very strange sort of tone in all three, I think. In the first two, there was a bittersweet quality to them that left me yearning to know if their heart's desires were ever fulfilled. In the last, I felt a bit of antagonism, as if you were trying to provoke your inner demons.  I think you fully succeded in doing so. I felt the rage and the despair as you were taken over by deaht and became the host it was craving. I felt like I was transforming right along with you.

Musicality:
There was definantly a musical quality to the "Nevermore" poems. The flowed so easily together, each one a mirror image of the other. Truly wonderful sork. I hope you fulfill your dreams of seeing your name in print.

I would lke to thank everyone who will/has voted for my project. I hope no one is slighted in this voting process. If you would like me to vote for you, please feel free to send me a link to your project, and I will happily have a look!

Voted my friend

Your poems are amazing. I would love to read more.