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Crime
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Tomona Teg plus seven FIRST PERSON (Rough draft)
Tomona Teg, the best thief who was thought to never gotten busted, recently was caught. She was born into the French Snakes, a group of the worlds best thieves and masterminds. On her last mission for the French Snakes, her ex set her up and he got away with the money as she got caught.
Now forced to work for the Government, they must perform a test on her or she gets sent to Prison for all of her life. The thing is, she might not survive. So its death or death.
Well, she survived and the funn ... more »
Now forced to work for the Government, they must perform a test on her or she gets sent to Prison for all of her life. The thing is, she might not survive. So its death or death.
Well, she survived and the funn ... more »
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Sounds very interesting. I will try to start reading sometime this week or next. If I don't that means I've lost it.
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this`sounds really god. I'd read it right away, but school is bugging me.
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not sure if like how done this part. It doesn't grab me or tell me what the story going to be about. I would use the second part it is more discriptive. leave the story telling in the chapters not at the head.
Tomona Teg plus seven
The guy in front of Gavin swung his huge hairy fist at him. Gavin ducked and ran by my side. "This is a fight scene? You never told me we were going to fight" Gavin yelled in my ear. I turned to give him a glare only to find a guy getting ready to punch him. "Duck Gavin" I screamed and he did... at the last second. "Are you hungry? Ill go get us some food!" he yelled and ran off away from the street. Great. Just great. Im stuck with intelligent food focused Shaggy.
Tomona Teg plus seven
The guy in front of Gavin swung his huge hairy fist at him. Gavin ducked and ran by my side. "This is a fight scene? You never told me we were going to fight" Gavin yelled in my ear. I turned to give him a glare only to find a guy getting ready to punch him. "Duck Gavin" I screamed and he did... at the last second. "Are you hungry? Ill go get us some food!" he yelled and ran off away from the street. Great. Just great. Im stuck with intelligent food focused Shaggy.
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Oh, cool!!! :D I'll definitely read when I have time. :D
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you know, this sounds really interesting! i can't wait to read it!
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You know what, me_93... I love you! lol XD not really! not that way.... PERVS.
I love all your unique and original stories. They all have unique storylines and I just keep falling in love with all of them INCLUDING this one!! I would read it, but I have the attention span of a five year old right now. I didn't sleep at ALL last night, I have the first day of school tomorrow, and I feel like I could pass out at any second. lol
I'll read it after school tomorrow, though.
With love and support,
-Ally~*
I love all your unique and original stories. They all have unique storylines and I just keep falling in love with all of them INCLUDING this one!! I would read it, but I have the attention span of a five year old right now. I didn't sleep at ALL last night, I have the first day of school tomorrow, and I feel like I could pass out at any second. lol
I'll read it after school tomorrow, though.
With love and support,
-Ally~*
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